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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What does friendship mean? You should write at least 120 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.友谊是人生永恒的主题 2.友谊到底意味着什么 3……友谊的重要性。 What does friendship mean? There is no definite answer. An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life. Friendship is to our life what salt is to dishes. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism. Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without it.二 On Overseas Study 1.有人认为出国留学是个人发展的最佳选择 2.也有人坚持在国内也能实现自己的理想 3.我的看法 With the deepening of reform and opening-up of our country, many people dream of going abroad for further study. They insist that the modern research facilities, world famous professors and excellent environment in those foreign co11eges and universities can help lay a perfect foundation for their future development. However, there are still many people who favor studying at home. They argue that studying abroad is too expensive and therefore doesn't pay, They also Point out that there are no language and cu1tural barriers if they study in our country, Just as the old saying goes, "Every advantage has its disadvantage." Both opinions are acceptable in some sense. If students have the chance and financial resources, they should seize the opportunity to go abroad and broaden their eyes. On the other hand, if conditions don't permit, they can pursue their studies in top universities at home. What counts is not the place where they study, but what they can learn.
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一开头万能公式: 1.开头万能公式一: 名人名言:有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编!原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧?经典句型:A proverb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言)It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言)更多经典句型:As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2.开头万能公式二: 数字统计原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。原则上在议论文当中不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型:According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。 Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 更多句型:A recent statistics shows that … 二结尾万能公式: 1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! 更多过渡短语: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型: Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that… 2.结尾万能公式二:如此建议 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话,那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了,因为这里虽然也是废话,但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。拽! Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem. 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典,因为考官本来经常考这个句型,而如果我们自己写出来,你说考官会怎么想呢?更多句型: Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 经典总结:英语六级作文八种常用句型一)原因 1.A number of factors are accountable for this situation. A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem). 2. The answer to this problem involves many factors. 3. The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that... 4. The factors that contribute to this situation include... 5. The change in ...largely results from the fact that... 6. We may blame ...,but the real causes are... 7. Part of the explanations for it is that ... One of the most common factors (causes ) is that ... Another contributing factor (cause ) is ... Perhaps the primary factor is that … But the fundamental cause is that 二)比较 1.The advantage far outweigh the disadvantages. 2.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B. 3.A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that... 4.It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it would be foolish to claim that... 5.For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages. 6.Like anything else, it has its faults. 7.A and B has several points in common. 8.A bears some resemblances to B. 9.However, the same is not applicable to B. 10. A and B differ in several ways. 11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects. 12. People used to think ..., but things are different now. 13. The same is true of B. 14. Wondering as A is ,it has its drawbacks. 15. It is true that A ... , but the chief faults (obvious defects )are ... 三)批驳 1)It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out. 2) There is a grain of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more important fact. 3) Some people say ..., but it does not hold water. 4) Many of us have been under the illusion that... 5) A close examination would reveal how ridiculous the statement is. 6) It makes no sense to argue for ... 7) Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ... 8) Such a statement mainly rests on the assumption that ... 9) Contrary to what is widely accepted, I maintain that ... 四)后果 1. It may give rise to a host of problems. 2. The immediate result it produces is ... 3. It will exercise a profound influence upon... 4. Its consequence can be so great that... 五)举例 1) A good case in point is ... 2) As an illustration, we may take ... 3) Such examples might be given easily. 4) ...is often cited as an example. 六)证明 1) No one can deny the fact that ... 2) The idea is hardly supported by facts. 3) Unfortunately, none of the available data shows ... 4) Recent studies indicate that ... 5) There is sufficient evidence to show that ... 6) According to statistics proved by ..., it can be seen that ... 七)开篇 1) Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2) Recently the problem has been brought into focus. 3) Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 4) Recently the issue has aroused great concern among ... 5) Nowadays there is a growing concern over ... 6) Never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 7) Faced with ..., quite a few people argue that ... 8) According to a recent survey, ... 9) With the rapid development of ..., ... 八)结尾 1) From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2) It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ... 3) It is necessary that steps should be taken to ... 4) In conclusion, it is imperative that ... 5) There is no easy method, but ...might be of some help. 6) To solve the above-mentioned problem, we must ... 7) In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up. 8) With the efforts of all parts concerned, the problem will be solved thoroughly. 9) We might do more than identify the cause ; it is important to take actions to ... 10) Taking all these into account, we ... 11) Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear...
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一、问题解决型 1.定义:问题解决型作文就是针对命题提出的问题或论题,列举所能够解决的方法、途径,并对这些方法或途径提出自己的挑选观点,然后结合自己的认识和体会,再做出评价或结论。 2.写作步骤: 第一步:提出论题。针对命题要求,提出论题,阐述其重要性。 第二步:列举方法。列举出解决问题的几种方法或途径。 第三步:做出评价或选择。根据列出的方法或途径,结合自身体会,做出评价或选择。 3.Title: How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic I. Outline A. Importance of solving the problem of heavy traffic B. Ways to solve the problem of heavy traffic C. My suggestion II. Sample With population rapidly increasing, heavy traffic has become a big headache for many cities. For this very reason, many government officials and experts have thought up some solutions, among which two draw much attention over the country. Some people suggested that more and wider roads should be laid down. It is evident that it can relieve the traffic congestion in the streets, thus accelerating(加速) the flow of buses and cars. And meanwhile, the fast and smooth flow of traffic reduces the air pollution caused by engine-idling. But the disadvantages of this solution lies in the fact that too much land could be used for farming or housing will inevitably be occupied by more and more roads. Therefore, others hold that the number of public bus routes should be raised so that more people can be transported and fewer people will have to travel in their own cars or ride bikes. Less use of bicycles and private cars will make the roads less crowded. Unfortunately, there is also a drawback in this solution: it will bring inconvenience to those who live or work far away from bus stop. As neither of the two solutions is effective enough to solve the problem of traffic in cities, I favor a combination of the two. While building more roads in places where land is less useful, we should increase the number of public bus lines. Only in this way can we more effectively solve the problem of heavy traffic.(247words) 范文点评: 本文严格按照问题解决型作文成文。作者首先提出交通问题是一个世界性问题,接着就列举了两个解决的方法,并就其优缺点做了阐述,最后作者提出了自己的观点-----综合两者的优点。本文内容切题,每个段落都围绕文章的主题展开,层次清楚,结构严谨;文字连贯,句式多变,是一篇得分较高的文章。 4.问题解决型作文模版 问题解决型模版按照开头、正文和结尾三个部分呈现。供我们研究、模仿,以便快速提高类似作文的写作水平。 Part One: The Model of Beginning Paragraph 1. ---------has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way. 2. Recently, --------has become the focus of the society. And in this way, people swarm to-------. 3. ------has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well. 4. Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of------. 5. ------ is now ------,and at the same time ------. These two factors have caused --------. Then what shall we do to solve ------- in the face of such a situation? Part Two: The Model of Body Paragraph 1. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that ------. Others argue that-------. 2. There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can ------, there are a number of advantages of -----. Another solution is to ---------. 3. Why--------? The first reason is that ------. The second reason is --------. The third is ---------. 4. The eventual result it brings out is -------. And perhaps the most obvious result of---- is ------. 5. ------ is necessary and important to our country’s development and construction. First, ------. What’s more, --------. Most important of all, ---------. Part Three: The Model of Concluding Paragraph 1. Personally, I believe that ----. Consequently, I am confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-------. 2. With the development of society, -----. So it is urgent and necessary to------. If every member is willing to contribute himself to society, it will be better and better. 3. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way,because I believe --------. 4. My own point of view is that ------ is a normal behavior in our society. There is no doubt that -----. AS an old saying goes, --------. 5. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in -----. And I believe that ------. Practice: 1.The Heavy Burden of College Students 2.The Lack of Responsibility of Young People 3.How to Solve the Problem of High Tuition in China 二、阐述观点型 1.定义;阐述观点型就是指,对某一个事物、事件或问题的重要性、必要性和正确性、优越性或危害性以及错误性进行的阐述和论证。也就是通过摆事实、讲道理的方式,来说服读者信服某个观点。例如,Benefits of (Sports);Advantages of (City Life);Importance of (Education); Harmful Effect of(Development against Nature Law) 2.写作步骤: 第一步:提出论点。针对命题,对命题所涉及的问题或现状进行阐述,然后,提出自己的论点。 第二步:论证论点。通过举例、使用事实、数据等方式来论证提出的论点是正确的。 第三步:提出建议或方法。在论证的基础上,重申自己的观点,提出自己的建议或方法来解决问题。 3.Title: The Problem of Rural Workers Every day, millions of workers from the countryside are seen to flow, by every means of transportation, into big cities. Then they will settle down and work for years there. Although they have made noticeable contributions to the urban expansion, the problems they bring about are not to be ignored. What arouses a series of complaints on the part of city residents is centered round the following problems. Violent competition stands out for job opportunity. Struggling for the already-scarce positions, thousands of the migrants put great pressure on the government as well as on city dwellers. Besides, they are also responsible for the increase in crime rates. Aside from those who are hardworking, some are tempted to steal and rob because of overpopulation against insufficient job openings. What’s more, the problem of sanitation is worth mentioning. Since they move into cities without any physical examinations, the spread of some infectious diseases is likely to occur. To make the powerful force of migrants exert its part to the full, city governments must pass a law that will get rural workers registered with a special organization, helping them obtain a job and instructing their life. And some medical teams need to be sent around to make sure that every worker is in good condition and cared for by our governments.(218words) 范文点评 本文按照阐述个人观点型作文成文。文章开篇就提出农民工问题,虽然他们有利于城市的建设和发展,但是也带来各种不可忽视的问题。在此作者提出自己鲜明的观点。接着就列举了农民工入城所带来的问题,如,造成就业紧张、给政府和城市居民带来压力、犯罪率提高问题以及疾病传染问题。针对这些问题,作者提出两点建议,从法律和医疗方面解决农民工引发的问题。本文层次清楚,逻辑性强。文字连贯,句式有变化,句子结构和用词正确。