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信函是考生备考的重点。主要应对措施是掌握各类应用文的套句,今天我就给大家分享一下作文句子的应用写法,希望能帮助到即将要考英语B级的同学们。

一、作文开头

万能句

1、With the development of technology and science,随着科学技术的发展(后

面一定要接句子,不能单独使用)

With the growth \progress of technology and science= Coincident with theadvancement of science and technology.

2、Considering the worsening situation in China, attention must be poured inoprotecting the environment.(考虑到中国越来越坏的情况,环境保护需要引起更

多的重视。)

3、The first five years of the new century witnessed the increasing developmtof China.(本世纪的头五年见证了中国的快速发展。)

As the global economy

grows at a fever pitch,……

4、Coincident with the fast growing national economy, there exists an

unfavorable and prevalent phenomenon in China.

5、There are growing concern for ……

6、In recent years, it is common to see\hear that ……

7、There is a general tendency that……(有一种趋势)

二、作文内容的陈述

结构in the first place/ secondly/ on top of that

以下手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。

1.改变句子的开头方式,不要一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词做状语等。

〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in themornig.?

〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went theretogeter.

〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.?

〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.?

2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句主

从复合句、分词状语等。

①强调句

〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday?

〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.

It was yesterday that I met him in the street.

②由with或without引导的短语。

如: He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.

③分词短语。

如:Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.?

④倒装句。

如: Only in this way can we achieve our goal.

Never before have seen such a wonderful film.

Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent

person.

⑤省略句。如:

If so,victory will be ours.

You can make some changes wherever necessary.

3.通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力

〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.

〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next

offender.

〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and

danced.

Some told stories. Some played chess

〔修正〕After a short rest,we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子,要结合使用,不能只用短句

或只用长句。

4.学会使用过渡词。如:①递进: then(然后), besides(还有),furthermore(而且),moreover(此外)等。

②转折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反),after all(毕竟)等

③总结: finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(总之),in conclusion(最后)等。

④强调: indeed(确实), certainly(一定), surely(确定), above all(尤其)等。

⑤对比: in the same way(同样地),just as(正如), on the onehand…on the ther hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。

相似的比较:similarly, in the same manner

相反的比较:on the other hand,conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary,compared with …,

5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词,以增加文采。如:

〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.

〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.

6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:

〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.

〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.

三、结尾

1、All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐社会All in

al,what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonios

society.)

2、Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……

3、As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取

一些有效的措施来做些什么)

4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……

5、 Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good maners。arise from politeness and respect for others.

Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter based on the following information given in Chinese. Remember to do your writing on the Translation/Composition Sheet.

英语范文

你想在课余时间参加职业技术培训,现给菲亚特公司去信了解该公司职业维修中心(vocation repair center)的情况。内容如下:

1) 了解汽车修理培训课程;喜欢摆弄汽车,并想成为一名机械师;

2) 准备参加9月至12月的一期;因为周一至周五学校要上课,只能周末参加培训;

3) 索取详尽资料及申请表。

参考范文:

Dear Sir or Madam:

I am writing to ask for information about training courses in automobile repair that your Vocation Repair Center offers. I enjoy working with cars and would like to train to be a mechanic.

I would like to take the course from September to December but I can only study in the evenings because I have a full?time learning course in my college.

I would appreciate if you send me details and an application form.

Yours sincerely,

Jiang Peng

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四六级英语写作类型1. 体裁:说明文,议论文最近几年的四六级作文的体裁以说明文和议论文为主。说明文如:How to Succeed in a Job Interview (2000,12,四级), How I Finance My College Education(2000,1 四级), Practice Makes Perfect, Haste Makes Waste(97,1 六级)议论文如:Don't Hesitate to Say “NO”(99,1 四级和六级), Can Money Buy Happiness(95,1 四级), Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?(2000,6 四级) Reading Selectively or Extensively? (99,6六级),Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? (98,6 四级和六级)2.段落类型:比较/对比,列举,程序等说明和议论文章所采用的文章扩展模式一般以比较/对照,举例、列举、因果、程序等者居多。如:Don't Hesitate to Say “NO”, Reading Selectively or Extensively等很多四六级写作中都涉及到两种观点的对比,整体的段落类型为对照型。Practice Makes Perfect, Harmfulness of Fake Commodities等可采用因果行的段落结构模式,也可以采用举例说明的结构模式。Advantages of a Job Interview则应采用列举的段落扩展模式。3. 出题方式:提纲式写作,中文提纲,一般为三句或两句;如:99年1月分考题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Don't Hesitate to Say “NO”。 You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below. 1. 别人请求帮助时,在什么情况下我们会说“不”。2. 为什么有些人在该说“不”的时候不说“不”。3. 该说“不”时不说“不”的坏处。再如:98年一月分考题Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: Harmfulness of Fake Commodities. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below. 1. 目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品(fake commodities)。为什么会有这种现象?2. 举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费者个人、社会等的危害。三、 四六级英语写作模式文章由段落组成,四六级写作的布局要求成三段式的写作模式,这就体现了由段落到篇章的结构模式。首先,我们来看一下英语段落的写作要求。1. 段落英语中的段落由三部分组成,即主题句、支撑细节和结论句。篇章中的段落可以没有结论句,但是一般应该有主题句。写作中要求1)开门见山提出主题如下面一篇写作:题目:“Good Health”提纲:(1) Importance of good health(2) Ways to keep good health(3) My own practices写作中可以将文章分成三段,但注意每段主题要明确,并且于第一句中提出:Good health is very important to everyone. With it, we can study hard; we can serve the country; we can do everything as we like. Without good health, everybody knows, we will fail to do things; we can't work efficiently; we may stay in hospital we'll become a burden of our family, etc. In my opinion, there are two ways to keep fit. First, we must eat a balanced diet. This is to say, we must eat not only eggs, fish, and meat, but also some vegetables and fruit everyday. Besides eating, drinking clean water is also important. Never get addicted to drinking the so-called “soft drinks”。 Second, exercising is a vital part of our daily life. We can do some running in the morning and play football in the afternoon.As a university student, I pay much attention to my physical exercises. I do some swimming in summer and some skating in winter. I often play badminton and tennis. I'm also careful with my diet. In a way, keeping healthy is not very hard if you just take it seriously.2) 段落扩展模式要适当英语文章的段落结构模式主要有:(1)比较和对照There are many differences between middle school and the college. First, in middle school, we have to listen to what the teacher says in class, to understand the content of the text. But in college, we must study by ourselves before class. If not, we couldn't follow the teacher. Second, there are lots of rules in middle school. For example, we should wear the uniform, the girls must have their hair cut short, and we are not allowed to make boy- or girlfriends. However, in college, we have more freedom. We can wear the clothes we like. And the girls could have long beautiful hair. We are also free to make boy or girlfriends. The third, in the middle school, we must study first. That means we could do nothing but study. In contrast, we have to do everything by ourselves in college. That means we must plan our time carefully. There are also other differences between our school life and our college life. We have to learn to adapt ourselves to college life.?再如:题目:“Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports”提纲:a. 体育运动的好处b. 体育运动可能带来的副作用c. 我参加体育活动的体会Sports do us good in many respects (TS)。 It goes without saying that taking exercises can build up our physical strength. In collective sports like basketball, volleyball, or football, we will learn the importance of cooperation. While taking part in sports game, we will try our best to win and arouse ourselves the competitive spirit. Sports can also help us relax after a period of exhausting work. However, as the saying goes, “there are two sides to everything”, and sports is without exception. We may hurt other players or ourselves if we are not careful enough when participating in sports activities. What's more, excessive or severe training can do harm to our health.My participation in sports tells me that sports can make us healthy both physically and psychologically. It is also a good way for people to know each other and can promote friendship between people. So long as we are carefully enough, sports can do us nothing but good.就比较对照而言,段落格式可采用逐点比较(point-by-point method)的方式,也可采用块状比较(block method)的方式。逐点比较的格式是A 1 —— B1;A2 —— B2 ;A3 —— B3块状比较的格式是:A 1,2,3 —— B1,2, 3上面第一例所采用的是逐点比较的结构模式,而 第二例采用的却是块状比较的方式。⑵ 列举As far as political views are concerned, people fall into three categories. First are the conservative people. Conservatives are opposed to sudden or great changes. Second are the liberal people. These people are in favor of progress and reform. But their opinions often seem to idealistic. The third type is the moderate people. The moderates keep everything within reasonable litmus. They are more practical in this hard world. In my opinion, most people seem to belong to this group.再如:题目:Advantages of a Job Interview (95.6)提纲:1. 现在找工作一般都要面试,通过面试,面试者和应试者可以相互了解情况。

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