Ares填词人
写作思路：确立中心，围绕选材，确定重点，安排详略，选材时要注意紧紧围绕文章的中心思想，选择真实可信、新鲜有趣的材料，以使文章中心思想鲜明深刻地表现出来，具体如下：
One day, I came home from school, walked to the door suddenly smell a delicious egg smell. I went to the kitchen to see, sure enough, it was my mother in the scrambled eggs. I asked my mother: "Mom, can I fry it once?" Mother immediately said: "Good! Good!"
Mother let me cut some green Onions, put them in a bowl, and then beat an egg in it, and then stir the eggs with a pair of chopsticks, and the scrambled egg material is ready. Next up is scrambled eggs.
First, I had to turn on the gas stove. I was afraid that the fire would burn my hands, so I ran away immediately without turning on the fire. Mother saw told me: "don't be afraid, the fire is up, will not burn hands."
I listened to my mother, not so afraid, tried a few more times, finally turned on the fire. Then pour some oil in the pot, and then put the eggs bit by bit into the pot, add some salt, fry them and put them on the plate and you're done.
Looking at the plate of their own fried delicious golden golden eggs, I am very happy. I asked my mother to taste it. I saw my mother eat a mouthful and said: "Really delicious." Sister ran over to eat a mouthful, said: "This egg how so salty ah."
I also tasted, as expected very salty, immediately extremely disappointed. Mother saw encourage me to say: "Nothing, do a few more times will be."
This scrambled eggs let me understand, the original seemingly simple things, do it is not easy ah!
一天，我放学回家，走到门口突然闻到一阵香喷喷的鸡蛋味。我走到厨房一看，果然是妈妈在炒鸡蛋。我问妈妈：“妈妈，我可以来炒一次吗？”妈妈马上说：“好呀！好呀！”
妈妈先让我切一些葱，放到碗里，再打一个鸡蛋在里面，然后用一双筷子把鸡蛋搅拌好，炒鸡蛋材料就准备好了。接下来就是要炒鸡蛋了。
首先要打开煤气灶，我怕火烧到我的手，打一下马上就跑开了，火没打开。妈妈见了告诉我：“不要怕，火是往上面的，不会烧到手。”我听了妈妈的话，没那么害怕了，又试了几次，终于把火打开了。接下来在锅子里倒一些油，再把鸡蛋一点一点的放到锅里，加上一些盐，炒一炒装到盘子里就大功告成了。
看着盘子里自己炒的香喷喷的金黄金黄鸡蛋，我非常开心。我让妈妈尝一尝好不好吃。只见妈妈吃了一口说：“真好吃。”妹妹跑过来吃了一口，说：“这鸡蛋怎么这么咸啊。”我也尝一口，果然很咸，顿时失望极了。妈妈看见了鼓励我说：“没事，多做几次就会了。”
这次炒鸡蛋让我明白，原来看似简单的事情，做起来也不容易啊！
弱智好儿童
写作思路：根据题目要求，以我在大学学到了什么作为主题，详细的描述自己的心声，最后进行总结。正文：
When I got the college entrance notice, I was so excited, all of my hard work had paid off. I could see my bright future. But going to the college is not as easy as I thought before, there are so many things I have to learn, I am happy to broaden my vision and enrich my knowledge.
当我接到大学录取通知的时候，我很兴奋，我所有的努力都得到了回报。我能看到自己光明的.未来。但是上大学并没有我之前想象中那么容易，我要学习的东西还很多，我很高兴开阔了视野，丰富了自己的知识。
Before I go to college, I had the beautiful imagination about the campus life. It felt like that I could do what I wanted and study was not the first thing. But the fact is that study is still the most important thing.
在我上大学以前，我对大学校园生活有着美好的幻想。似乎我能做自己想做的，学习不过第一要事。但是事实上，学习仍然是最重要的事情。
So many students fight for their dreams here and they study so hard to be the excellent students. If I focus on playing, then I will lag behind. So I also have the pressure and I have to keep up with my classmates.
很多学生在这里为他们的理想奋斗，他们是如此努力学习，为了成为优秀的学生。如果我专注玩耍，就会落后。所以我也有压力，要赶上同学。
Besides knowledge, I also learn to be an independent person. I lived with my parents before I moved to the dormitory. Living outside, I need to learn to get along with others and solve the problems by myself. I am growing up and learn to be a mature person.
除了知识，我也学着去成为一个独立的人。在我搬去宿舍前，我和父母住在一起。在外面住，我需要学着去和别人相处，自己解决问题。我不断成长，学着成为一个成熟的人。
Smile丶燚
I have learned many different things about English this year. Most of them are the new vocabularies that I use each day to practice my speaking skills along with my friends. I had fun using vocabularies I learned to identify items or actions I saw. I also learn some of the basic writing strategies to improve my essays to give more detailed descriptions so readers will understand my writing better. I did a lot better with my English after what I've learned in class this year. My English helped me make more sense out of an English book or an English film. I get to know another language which I think is simply amazing. I am always eager to learn more English in the future, because it's such a fun subject to learn in school. I know with the help of English, I will have a brighter future where I can go visit a foreign English country and be able to point out places and ask for help.
素颜～红太狼
我学会了跳绳：My favourite sport is rope skipping.Rope skipping is a good sport. learning jump rope method is very simple. Rope skipping can prevent stomach problems, weight loss, help sleep. Rope skipping can also train people jumping, speed, balance, endurance and explosiveness. The same time develop accuracy, flexibility, coordination, and the indomitable will and spirit of making progress. So, i think rope skipping is a good sport.
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