昂昂千里
One possible verson:An English Editor WantedOur school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition .The job mainly Includes two parts: One is to choose proper English articles from other newspapers , magazines or the Internet for us students .The other is to pick out articles from students in our school and deit them for use.We hope that he /she could meet the following requirements.First , he /she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others .Second , it is necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine art .Needless to say that the ability to use the coputer is important as well.Those who are interested in the job ,please get in touch with the Students’ Union this week .Students’ Union 试题分析:本篇书面表达要求写一则启示,招聘校报英文版编辑。为了使文章段落清晰,在篇章结构方面应分两段来分别介绍工作内容和对应聘学生的要求;在陈述各要点时要恰当使用连接词以使内容连贯,上下文衔接自然,而且语言应注意简洁;此外在时态方面,应该使用一般现在时。【亮点说明】文章语言简练,通俗易懂。文中多使用简单句,使文章显得简洁明了,符合启示、通知类文体对语言的要求。文中one。。。,the other;first、 second等表顺序的连接词也使文章层次分明,条理清楚,显示了作者思路的清晰。高级词汇Needless to say和经典定语从句Those who are interested in the job的出现给朴素的语言增添了一抹亮丽的色彩。
南宫爱默
The editor's job mainly includes two parts. One is to choose articles which is suitable for the students from English papers, English magazines and the Intemet. The other is to select and edit the articles from students. If you want to apply for the job you must meet the following requirements. You should be willing to give up some of your spare time to serve the students. And you should be good at English and art and be able to use computer skillfully. Will anyone interested in it please get in touch with the Student Union during this week? Thanks. 编辑的工作主要包括两部分。其一是从英文报刊、杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章;二是选择和编辑同学们的来稿。 如果你想应聘这份工作,你必须符合以下要求。你要乐意贡献一些业余时间为同学们服务。你要英文、美术都好,并且能熟练使用电脑。 请感兴趣的同学在本周内与学生会联系。谢谢。
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