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Today is April 10th. It's my birthday.
今天是四月十日,是我的生日。
My mother held a birthday party for me at home.
我妈妈在家为我举办了一个生日聚会。
My friends came to my party and brought me some gifts and their best wishes.
我的朋友们来参加我的聚会,给我带来了一些礼物和他们最好的祝愿。
I feel very happy.
我感到非常高兴。
At the beginning of the party, my mother lit candles on the cake for us.
聚会开始的时候,我妈妈为我们点燃了蛋糕上的蜡烛。
I made a wish and we blew out the candles together.
我许了个愿,我们一起吹灭了蜡烛。
Then we shared the cake. We sang and danced to the music at the party. I'm very excited.
然后我们分享了蛋糕。我们在晚会上随着音乐唱歌跳舞。我非常激动。
I had a good time today.
我今天过得很开心。
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