诗诗雨天
写作思路及要点：围绕网上购物，举出网上购物的利与弊，最后总结自己的想法。
Nowadays, online shopping has become one of the most popular ways of shopping. Going out shopping has become a kind of leisure walk.
如今，网购已经成为人们的.热门购物方式之一，出门购物已经成为一种休闲时的散步。
There are many advantages of online shopping. It can "go shopping" at home, ordering is not limited by time and place.
网购的优点有很多。它可以在家“逛商店”，订货不受时间、地点的限制。
It gets a lot of commodity information and can buy goods that are not available locally. It can save time and effort from ordering, buying goods to goods door-to-door without visiting the scene.
它获得较大量的商品信息，可以买到当地没有的商品。它从订货、买货到货物上门无需亲临现场，既省时又省力。
To sum up, it can be seen that online shopping breaks through the barriers of traditional business, and has great attraction and influence on consumers, enterprises and the market. In the new economic era, it is undoubtedly an ideal mode to achieve "multi win" effect.
综上可以看出，网上购物突破了传统商务的障碍，无论对消费者、企业还是市场都有着巨大的吸引力和影响力，在新经济时期无疑是达到“多赢”效果的理想模式。
However, online shopping has many disadvantages. Online shopping can only be seen photos, to the goods really arrive in the hand, will feel different from the physical, which is not as good as in the mall to buy at ease. Network payment is not secure, may be peeping, password stolen.
但是，网购还有许多缺点。网购只能是看到照片，到货物真的到达手里，会感觉和实物有不一样，这就不如在商场里买到的放心。网络支付不安全，可能被偷窥，密码被盗。
And the delivery is too slow. Although the speed of EMS is faster than that of the past, buyers still have to wait for a few days. Online shopping also can't experience the leisure of shopping and chatting with relatives and friends.
而且收货太慢，尽管现在EMS的速度已经比以前的邮寄快了不知多少倍，毕竟买家还是要等上几天。网购也不能和亲戚朋友一起体会逛街闲聊的悠闲。
I don't think online shopping is better than shopping. We should reduce or strengthen the security of online shopping.
我认为网购不比逛街好，应该减少网购或加强网购的安全性。
许小丹丹丹
可以就网络的利弊开始辨析，举例生活中的好坏处：
With the rapid development of our society, more and more people are fond of online shopping for its convenience. Online shopping has been a heated fashion. But different people have different views on this point. After all, every coin has two sides.
随着社会的快速发展，因为网上购物方便，越来越多的人喜欢网上购物。网上购物已经成为热门时尚。但是，不同的人对这有不同的看法。毕竟，每个硬币都有两面。
Online shopping has advantages as well as disadvantages. Firstly, nowadays, the Internet has become a must. As convenient as it is, online shopping caters for those who are occupied by busy work or other things. And it can help us save much money, which is cheaper than what we buy in the physical store. What’s more, it contributes the Internet to the further development.
网上购物有优势也有劣势。首先，如今互联网已经成为必须品。由于它很便捷，网上购物迎合了无暇购物的人的需求。而且它还可以帮我们节省不少钱，比我们在实体店买更便宜。更重要的是，它有助于互联网进一步发展。
However, it is also a risk of online shopping as we pay the bill online by our credit cards, we may be cheated by the dishonest shoppers. Sometimes the quality of what we buy online is much worse than we could imagine.
然而，因为我们用信用卡在网上支付，所以网上购物也是有风险的，我们可能会被不诚实商家骗。有时我们在网上买的东西的质量比我们想象的糟很多。
In my opinion, when we are shopping online, we should keep wise to prevent us from treating. And we’ll find that online shopping has advantages over disadvantages.
在我看来，当我们在网上购物时，我们应当保持理智，以防被骗。这样我们就会发现网上购物利大于弊。
梦回红楼
写作思路：写出网购的优点和缺点，对于优点和缺点，分开举例说明。
正文：
With the development of the Internet and the popularization of computers,shopping on the Internet has become a commonplace in our life.
译文：随着互联网的发展和计算机的普及，网上购物已经成为我们生活中的一个普遍的问题。
Here consumers can buy almost everything they need.
译文：在这里，消费者可以买到他们所需要的一切。
Shopping on the Internet has a lot of advantages, of which the most important is perhaps its convenience.
译文：网上购物有很多好处，其中最重要的也许是它的方便。
People don't have to waste a lot of their energy and precious time to go from one shop to another to choose the commodities they like.
译文：人们不必浪费大量的精力和宝贵的时间去从一个商店到另一个选择他们喜欢的商品。
This is especially desirable to the old, the sick and the busy people who cannot go to the shops in person.
译文：这对于那些不能亲自去商店的老人、病人和忙碌的人来说尤其可取。
The goods come in all shapes, sizes and colors on the Internet.
译文：这些货物在网上的各种形状,大小和颜色都有。
All they need to do is to sit in front of their computers and click the mouses.
译文：所有他们需要做的是坐在电脑前点击鼠标。
The commodities they order will be delivered to them promptly.
译文：他们所订购的商品将及时送到他们的。
However, shopping on the Internet also has its disadvantages.
译文：然而，在互联网上购物也有其缺点。
The first disadvantage is that the consumers can't see the goods or try them on personally.
译文：第一个缺点是消费者看不到商品或者亲自试用。
Sometimes, the real goods may not be the same as what they have seen on the computer.
译文：有时候，真正的商品可能不一样，因为他们在电脑上看到的。
The second disadvantage is that some shops on the Internet are not registered.
译文：其次是一些商店在网上没有注册。
They will never deliver anything to you after they get the money from you.
译文：在他们从你得到的钱之后,他们永远不会给你提供任何东西。
Once cheated, you will find that you have nowhere to go to complain.
译文：一旦被欺骗，你会发现你无处可去抱怨。
精灵酱酱儿
More and more people begin to shop online. Of course there are many advantages . First it can save much time ,especially for those who are busy with their work . Second it is convenient and you don'
shirleycci
Disadvantages of online shoppingNot physically present: one major disadvantage of shopping online is that you cannot physically touch the product.Time consuming return: the return policies of the business can be a bit tricky when it comes to online shopping. The return is obviously possible but it takes time and that can be disturbing.
KING纠结
Online shopping is a popular way of making purchase. It is time saving and easy tracking. And it give you access to millions of suppliers with competing prices and services. You can even order your hot fresh Kentuky Fried Chicken without moving your feet by click a few buttons on the website. However, it is hard to tell which hamburger taste better by just looking at the pictures online.To help make that decision, you will have to at least make ONE trip to the actual KFC store to look and try. And for books, I would prefer go to a real bookstore and flipping through the books I like rather than staring at the cover page on Amazon, try to decide which book I might like better. For clothes, socks, shoes, it is way too much details to tell when purchasing. In an actual store, you can use your fingers, your sense, your nose to help make that decision. If you shop online, only your eyes is going to help. I would say, enjoy online shopping as well as mall shopping. You will love both. There's no ice cream peddlers hanging around while shopping on amazon.
