三鲜豆皮皮
写作思路：将自己的优点和缺点分别详细地罗列出来，比如“我”有一个缺点，那就是“丢三落四”，“我”的优点就是乐于助人等等，语言要通顺连贯，中心要明确。
正文：
I have a shortcoming, that is "forgetting", but this shortcoming has made my parents upset. Once, when the class leader checked the homework, I found that I didn't bring the math "learn with you". Finally, I used my classmate's telephone watch to call my mother and ask her to send things to school.
我有一个缺点，那就是“丢三落四”，而这个缺点可是将我爸妈折腾坏了。有一次，下课组长检查作业时，我发现数学《伴你学》没有带，最后还是用了同学的电话手表给妈妈打电话，让妈妈把东西送到学校。
One of my advantages is that I am willing to help others, which can set up a good image in the hearts of my classmates. Sometimes, if the ant did not hesitate to take out some of the stationery, he would not worry about it.
我的优点就是乐于助人，这个优点可让我在同学们的心中树立了好的形象。有时一些同学会忘记带钢笔、本子等学习用品，如果被我这个“热心肠”看到后，总会毫不犹豫地将我书包中的备用文具拿出来，对他伸出援助之手，不再让他着急得像热锅上的蚂蚁——团团转。
These are my shortcomings and advantages. I believe that one day I can turn my shortcomings into advantages and carry forward my advantages.
以上就是我的缺点和优点了，相信有一天我可以把缺点变为优点，把优点继续发扬下去。
福气娃娃TT
My Strengths and Weaknesses我的优缺点It is important to know our good and bad points because this knowledge will help us to improve ourself. We should examine ourselves and learn who we are.对于我们来说，正确地认识自身的优缺点是很重要的，因为这个认识有助于我们自身的提高。我们应该检查自己并学着（认识）我们是谁。Above all, we should recognize our strengths and weaknesses. For example, I am healthy and fit, so I can work hard. I'm also optimistic, humble and polite. These are my strengths. However, I also have weaknesses. For one thing, I'm stubborn and a little impatient. I'm sometimes lazy as well and can spent a whole day just watching TV and eating junk food. I'm not ashamed to admit these bad pints. Knowing what they are lets me focus on improving myself.首先，我们应该认识自己的优点和缺点。举个例子来说，我是个身体健康的人，所以我可以很努力的工作。我也是一个乐观、谦逊和有礼貌的人。这些是我的优点。可是，我也有缺点。首先，我是一个倔强和有点没有耐心的人。有时候我也很懒惰的，（我）可以花整天的时间看电视和吃垃圾食品。我没有对允许这些缺点（出现）而感到羞愧。了解这些优缺点使我（的注意力）聚焦在提高自身方面。
Rainbow蓓
Everybody has strenghth and weakness. I am a friendly, warm-hearted, generous and easy going girl. I am always ready to help others. I work hard every day and I am good at nearly all the subjects except PE. I often help my classmates with their lessons and I can get on well with them. Besides, I am polite to others and I never fight with others. At home I often help my parents with the housework. But I don't like doing sports. So I think I am not strong enough.
