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高分扣点句式一 作地点状语的介词短语前置将作地点状语的介词短语前置之后，其所在句往往会倒装，这是一种很容易得分的句式安排，特别适合用在英语一图画作文的描述中。例：Between two pictures lies a sharp contrast（鲜明的对比）.（适用于给出两幅图进行对比的写作题目）句中将作地点状语的介词短语Between two pictures提前，主语a sharp contrast和谓语lies调换了位置，形成倒装，与A sharp contrast lies between two pictures这样的平铺直叙相比，优势立现。高分扣点句式二用分词（词组）作状语分词在句中作状语，可以表示时间、条件、原因、结果、让步、伴随等。分词结构的逻辑主语应与主句主语一致。例：A father is smoking on the sofa and asking his son to study hard, leaving the boy frowning（皱眉）helplessly.（适用于2016年写作）句中用现在分词短语leaving…作状语，表明父亲这一系列举动造成的结果。与A father is smoking…and asking… This makes the boy…这样分成两句表述相比，分词结构更显高级。高分扣点句式三用名词（词组）作同位语用名词（词组）解释说明前面出现的抽象名词，该名词（词组）即为抽象名词的同位语。写作中，适当使用名词（词组）作同位语，不仅能使表意清晰，而且丰富了句型结构。例：Mobile phone addiction（手机依赖症）, the very product of science and technology evolution（科技发展）, becomes more common today. （适用于2015年写作）句中的名词词组the very product of…作同位语，对Mobile phone addiction进行解释说明，与Mobile phone addiction is the very product…and becomes…这一句式相比，更显语言功底。高分扣点句式四适时使用强调句强调句是英语中经常使用的一种句式，以其特定的结构（It is/was+被强调部分+who /that...）来突显说话者想要强调的内容。在写作时，适时使用强调句不仅可以突出重点，也能增加语言表现力。例：It is a sensible（明智的）choice that may lead us to success.（适用于2014年写作）句中采用强调句型突显出主语a sensible choice的重要性，与A sensible choice may lead…这样简单的主谓宾陈述句相比，语气更加坚定有力。高分扣点句式五巧用独立主格独立主格结构是由名词或代词加上形容词、分词、动词不定式等构成的一种独立结构，用于表示时间、原因、条件、伴随等情况。考生写作时可以适当使用独立主格结构，提升句子档次。例：In the middle of the cartoon stands a hot-pot（火锅）, with many cultural elements mixed in it.（适用于2010年写作）句中采用独立主格结构with many cultural elements…作伴随状语，点明火锅的不同之处，即其中混合着多种文化元素。与In the middle of the cartoon stands a hot-pot and many…这种并列结构相比，独立主格更胜一筹。高分扣点句式六巧用插入语插入语是插在句子中的一个词、短语或从句。在复习写作时，有意识地训练插入语是很可取的，一方面，插入语可以补充说明文章内容，另一方面，可以使写出的句子更具层次感。例：However, we should consider honoring our parents——as Chinese Confucianism（儒家思想）emphasizes filial piety（孝道）——a moral obligation.（适用于2014年写作）句中以破折号引出关于儒家思想的相关内容作插入语，侧面反应出孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德。无疑，插入语的使用使该句形式新颖且极具吸引力。高分扣点句式七引用名言警句在写作中，引用与文章观点相契合的名言警句具有画龙点睛的效果，值得一试。例：Every coin has two sides.（凡事具有两面性）（适用于讨论事物利弊的文章）如果将该句直白地写成It has both advantages and disadvantages当然也不为错，但相比之下，谚语的使用显然更具感染力。
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模板一：图画作文来源：考试大 This illustration depicts_________ (图画中的人物)Ving, with______________（补充说明）. Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to_____________(进一步阐释) It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______(图画主题), which is ______________(进一步的说明). He seems to be saying that_______________(给出细节). In my opinion, ___________(个人阐述). This simple picture is a wake up call for ______(所涉群体，如the whole of the human race). Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _____________(问题所在). One the one hand, we must _________________(建议一). It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________(进一步说明). On the other hand, ________________（建议二） Only in this way can we___________(展望前景). 模板二：图表作文来源：考试大 The chart gives us an overall picture of the ____________(图表主题). The first thing we notice is that_______________(图表最大特点). This means that as __________, _________________(进一步说明). We can see from the statistics given that _______________(图表细节一). After ving_________(细节一中的第一个变化), the _____Ved+幅度+时间（紧跟着的变化）. The figures also tells us that_________________________(图表细节二). (数据位置，如In the second column), we can see that ____________accounts for _______(进一步描述). Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that___________(结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that_____________(给出原因). / It is high time that we Ved(发出倡议) 模板三：利弊型作文 Recently the issue of whether or not______(讨论话题) has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_________. For one thing, __________can bring ____ to_____________(优点一). For another, it is widely hold that people usually ____when ________________________________(优点二). But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to__________, among which are ____________(列举缺点). For instance, it can be __________to _____________(举例说明). In addition, many people find it ________(形容词)to _______________（第二个缺点） When asked to __________, I tend to ____________. This is because I _______________(原因一). Furthermore, _______________________(原因二). Finally, ______________(原因三). 模板四：展望未来型 With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________(引出现象). However, _______ has________________, as____________(提出问题). As a result, _____has ____________________(指出影响). The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones. First , __________________(影响一). More importantly, ________________(影响二). Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望) There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more (比较级). In addition, we all agree that________________________(第二个原因)
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