xiaomakuaipao
哦，关于英语剧本方面的话题，其实你可以这样去换个思考。啊，就像你可以就是先把一个小小的中文剧本拿到，然后放到百度翻译上面去翻译成英文，这样这种形式也是可以的。或者是参考一下那些小故事的形式，相声什么的。
太极武者NO1
白 :Long ago, there lived a girl. Her mather had died and her father had married again,His new wife had two daugters. They are so bad as their mother. The poor girl had to work day and night. She must sleep in the kitchen. She weared drity clothes. All of them called her cinders for Cinderella. However, we’ll show you a different play today. (灰姑娘昂首挺胸帅气十足地上场) 旁白 ：She is so strong, and smart. Especially she is good at sport. Now, she is running for the 100 meter race.(灰姑娘冲刺,旁边老师读秒:11’9) Now, she is playing basketball.(灰姑娘以一敌众,轻松灌篮) Now,she is practicing Chinese gongfu(灰姑娘打拳,对手倒) This is her----Cinderella 灰姑娘(怒,看旁白) :Do you finish? 旁白 :Ok(结巴)continue, even she is perfect, she still can’t escape the poor life, Why? That is----- 继母(假装洗衣服) :How cold the water! I’m too old to do anything, My leg is so painful. (灰姑娘默,从继母手中拿过洗衣盆) (一姐将盆碗碰得乱响.灰姑娘默,从姐手中拿过盆碗) (一姐手持针线缝衣,刺手,尖叫—灰姑娘默,从姐手中拿过衣服) 第一幕 (灰姑娘在帮后母按摩肩膀) 二姐(奔入,扬动手中传单) :Mom, Mom, Look! There are some leaflets. I got them on the street. The King is having a party. The Prince will look for a wife. 一姐(托腮) :I must be choosen, I am the most beautiful girl in the world. 二姐(凭空跳舞) :No, Not you. I have the charming shape, I am the Queen. (两姐争吵起来,继母从女儿手中拿过传单,亲吻) 继母 :Oh, baby. Stop. You two are the most beautiful girls in our country. He will probably choose one of you. Come on , make up yourself. We haven’t enough time!(瞪灰姑娘)Cinderella, what are you doing? Come here, help your sisters! 灰姑娘 :OK, I will. But, mom, can I go to the party tonight? I want to ------ (三人敛神) 一姐 :Oh, my God! I forgot Tim’s homework. He gave us a lot of homework.. I can’t finish, what should I do ? 二姐(拿书,指,附和) :Oh, Yes, Yes. Look, execise A, excise B, excise C, excise D, excise E, Oh, planning tree, essay, study plan------(偷瞄灰姑娘,哭)Oh, my God! Oh
漫山红遍
中国学生有逆反心理,但没有将这一思维用在刀刃上,mary姐姐编了一套卖皮鞋的对话,楼主不着急的话，等我下，我回头给你编排段,"退皮鞋"的对话,机智,幽默的对白,不乐,我咯吱你!我觉得买卖是个相互的，既然有买的就有质量问题,被商家退掉的!思考中.....----------------------我时间很紧,我先把创意给你,回头时间有的话,我尽量翻译给你,多多指教!好对话如何提升它的艺术价值和技术含量,我在这个对话中，做了深层的探索!参考一下!我策划的是退鞋子的，而这个退鞋的本子关键有两个我设计的卖点,描绘了一个某国吝啬鬼,从国外到北京旅游,买了双鞋子,玩了几天，就回国了，结果呢，到家就坏了，他一看保修退还日子还没到，又赶紧飞了回来,但由于错过了国际变更线,结果来这,还是过期了,呵!--------------------关键卖点:1.通过微型小剧本的对白,塑造一个吝啬鬼的形象,通过他砍价的方式,就可以看出,后来又坐飞机飞回大陆退鞋,更家使这一人物的形象丰满了.2.国际变更线,这也是一卖点,不光使读者学到做人,更要学更多的地理知识.相关生活背景:问:我在赶个剧本,在美国还有其他国家,买东西能退吗，退钱可以吗? 还有，从美国飞到中国经过国际变更线吗?谢谢! 能退,只要商品的小票留着你可以退.甚至有些商品你可以从东边商店买的在西边的商店退,只要是连锁的就行.他们退换货的自由很大.从美国飞中国,我是到东京转机后由东京到北京.也可以直飞.还可以到首尔,经首尔转机到北京的.
