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1. 确定文体：这是一篇新闻报道，写作中应注意其格式。2. 主体时态：以一般过去时为主。3. 主体人称：第三人称。4. 内容要点：① 事件；② 时间； ③ 地点；④ 情况。5. 注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，逻辑连贯。警方正在调查。【审题要素】1. 确定文体：这是一篇新闻报道，写作中应注意其格式。2. 主体时态：以一般过去时为主。3. 主体人称：第三人称。4. 内容要点：① 事件；② 时间； ③ 地点；④ 情况。5. 注意句子结构准确，信息内容完整，逻辑连贯。【思路引导】 想要成功地完成这一写作任务，需要经过以下步骤：1. 构思：与同学讨论题目，交流信息，确定写作内容。2. 拟定提纲：按照标题、导语、主体列出提纲，理顺要报道的事件的逻辑顺序。 A red car crashed into a white minibus Early this morning a serious traffic accident took place. a red car crashed into a white minibus 5 kilometers south from the centre of the city at about 5 o’clock this morning, killing all of its four passengers, including a six-year-old boy.The driver of the white minibus was also seriously injured but is out of danger now. What caused the accident still remains unclear and the police are looking into the matter.
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英语新闻:Rage, unrest reign in FergusonWASHINGTON, Nov. 29-- Rage and unrest have once again taken over in the past week in Ferguson, a previously little-known northern suburb of St. Louis, Missouri, in the wake of a grand jury decision not to indict a white police officer in the fatal shooting of a black teenager in August.More than a dozen buildings along the West Florissant Avenue, a few blocks from where Brown was shot, were set ablaze and police cars were vandalized on Monday night following the announcement of the grand jury's decision.On South Florissant Road, a main commercial strip in Ferguson, shops were looted with smashed windows.Local residents and business owners were nervous and uncertain about the future in the once peaceful town of about 21,000 people.
