刘李铭俊521
1. invented(发明) 改为 discovered（发现） 2. classical(古典的) 改为classics（名著） Chinese classics：中国古典文学3. effect(影响--名词) 改为 affect（影响---动词）4. artistic（艺术的，完美的） 改成 artificial(不自然的，矫揉造作的) 她接待了他，带着很不自然的微笑，假装她很高兴见到他的样子。5. at 改为 of 固定搭配 be jealous of 意为“嫉妒” 6. In 改为At at length “最后，终于”； in length “在长度上”7. part(部分--名词) 改为 apart（分开的--形容词） take things apart 在幼儿园里，我们鼓励孩子们把东西拆分开，再进行重组。8. flattering（作定语） 改为 flattered（做表语） 9. with 改为 from 固定搭配derive ... from：从...得到10. been 去掉， 不用被动语态。 好多事已经变得无法再辨出原来面目。
小天使006
1.as well去掉 2.repeatedly去掉 3.usually去掉 4. he 改成it 5.because of 去掉 6....at this school has doubled 7.unskilled去掉 8.or so去掉 9.called去掉 10.seriously去掉 11. quiet 改成quite 还是你打错了？ 12.organized, and there 13. There are 改there is 就近原则 ； same 去掉 14. 这句有点累赘by the whole class去掉 15.in addition a course in 去掉 15.or so 去掉, and could no longer be seen去掉 16.in my opinion he has not done his work well and it needs improving. 17.Would you please consider whether you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China. 18.since he had missed many lectures,he was aware of the possible of his failing the exam. 19.You must work out an outline first, then collect enough material to support your point.14题开始不算错句 就是犯了累赘的问题 有些也不是很确定 你看着做吧 哈哈
lifeierwawa
首先一个问题是你的逗号，逗号前面没有空格，后面有空格。第五句改成A course of instruction is necessary to swim properly更顺畅。第六句逗号用错了。一句好里面两个逗号这样放着就代表你去掉逗号里面的句子整句话也会通，但是你这里不通，所以应该是Returning home after work, supper was waiting for him in the kitchen.第七句要加个a, the young man is honest and hard-working, also a very reliable worker.第八句改成There are many ways we can use to get to know the outside world.
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