巨匠智能家居
Ihavemanyshortcomings.Ioftengetupverylate,soI'moftenlateforschool.Ican'tdowellinclass,forIoftenfeeltiredandsleepy.Idon'thavebreakfasteveryday.Ilikeplayingcomputergames,soIgotobedverylate.Ilikeeatingsnacksindeadofeatingrice.我有很多缺点。我经常起得很晚，所以经常上学迟到。上课的时候，我表现得很差劲，因为我经常觉得又累又想睡。每天我都不吃早餐。我喜欢玩电脑游戏，所以每天都很晚睡觉。我喜欢吃零食而不喜欢吃饭。
佐鉺三鉺洞
Everybody has strenghth and weakness. I am a friendly, warm-hearted, generous and easy going girl. I am always ready to help others. I work hard every day and I am good at nearly all the subjects except PE. I often help my classmates with their lessons and I can get on well with them. Besides, I am polite to others and I never fight with others. At home I often help my parents with the housework. But I don't like doing sports. So I think I am not strong enough.
Crystallam88
写作思路：将自己的优点和缺点分别详细地罗列出来，比如“我”有一个缺点，那就是“丢三落四”，“我”的优点就是乐于助人等等，语言要通顺连贯，中心要明确。
正文：
I have a shortcoming, that is "forgetting", but this shortcoming has made my parents upset. Once, when the class leader checked the homework, I found that I didn't bring the math "learn with you". Finally, I used my classmate's telephone watch to call my mother and ask her to send things to school.
我有一个缺点，那就是“丢三落四”，而这个缺点可是将我爸妈折腾坏了。有一次，下课组长检查作业时，我发现数学《伴你学》没有带，最后还是用了同学的电话手表给妈妈打电话，让妈妈把东西送到学校。
One of my advantages is that I am willing to help others, which can set up a good image in the hearts of my classmates. Sometimes, if the ant did not hesitate to take out some of the stationery, he would not worry about it.
我的优点就是乐于助人，这个优点可让我在同学们的心中树立了好的形象。有时一些同学会忘记带钢笔、本子等学习用品，如果被我这个“热心肠”看到后，总会毫不犹豫地将我书包中的备用文具拿出来，对他伸出援助之手，不再让他着急得像热锅上的蚂蚁——团团转。
These are my shortcomings and advantages. I believe that one day I can turn my shortcomings into advantages and carry forward my advantages.
以上就是我的缺点和优点了，相信有一天我可以把缺点变为优点，把优点继续发扬下去。
莫小木木木
advantage i am so clever that i can work out the math problems very soon.i am good at reading ,dancing.i always give a show on the stage .what is more, my engish is perfect, i can communicate with foreigners very well.shortcoming i am so lazy that i hate washing clothes.when comes the winter, i hate it more.i lack of confidence so that when facing problems i will be afraid.without my parents' encourages i do not know where i will be today.
