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（一）ThemaninthepictureLookatthepicture!Thereisanoldmaninthepicture.Hisheadisbald.Lookathiseyes,theyarefishlike,(应加上连词and)theyaresobig.Ithinkhisnoseishigh-bridged,butitisnothooked.Hisfaceisveryflabby.Andhehasabigmouth.It’snotfull.HewearsawhiteT-shirt,(应加上and)hewearsconservative(应用副词conservatively).Hisearslookverysmall,becausehisfaceisverylongandbig.HewearsacleanwhiteT-shirt.Ithinkthemanisveryugly.Howaboutyou?(二)MyfavoritestarMyfavoritestarisZhangJie.Hehasgotaroundfaceandheisthin.Hehascurlyhairandfringes.Hishairischestnutandhiseyesaresmall.Hiseyelid(应是eyelids)aredoubledandhiseyelashesarelong.Hehasgotagreathighnosebridge.Ilikehisteethbecausethey’reeven.Hisbackisstraightandheistall.Heisveryhandsomeandgorgeous.Hisdressisfashionable.(三)MyclassmateSheismyclassmate.HernameisXuBingyu.Herfaceisroundanddimpled.Herhairstyleis(应加上a)ponytail,andherhairisjet-black.Shehastwobigandwateryeyesandlongeyelashes.Shealsohasahigh-bridged(加上nose)andtwosmallears.Hermouthisgenerous,andherteethareeven.Shehasaroundchinandabullneck.Herbackisstiff.Sheiskindofshortbutreallycuteandpretty.Herdressistidyandfashionable,andsheusuallywearsablackblouse.Hersmileissunny.Wearegoodfriends.(四)MyselfIhavearoundface.AndwhenIwatch(应是lookin)themirror,Icanseeapallidface.Iamwell-featuredbutIhavesomepimple(pimples).Idon’thaveanydimple(dimples).Myhaircutisacrewcut.Sometimesit’scenterpartingandsometimesit’ssideparting.Andmyhairisjet-black.Ihavetwobigeyes,andtheyareclose-set.AndIhavedoubleeyelids.AndIevenhavelongeyelashs(应是eyelashes).Mynoseispointed.Ihaveapairofbeautifulears,andIhaveabigmouth,sosometimesIamverybigmouth(应为sometimesIamaverybigmouth).Myteethareeven(maybe,it’sjustIthink),andthecolorareblonde.Mychinisround,andmyneckisalittlelong.MybellyisflatbecauseIamtoothinthoughIeatalotofthings(food更好)everyday.Mybackisalittlebended.IamofmediumheightandIamverythin.MyclassmatessaythatIamverycutebutIdon’tthinkso.Mydressistidyandwell-featured,but(没有转折关系，用and更好)sometimesit’sveryfashionable!（五）MyfavoritestarAkiyamaMioismyfavoritestar.Sheisslim.Herhairislongandstraight.Sometimesherhairstyleis(加上a)bun.Hereyesarewatery.Shehaslongeyelashes.Hernoseispointed.Hersmileishappy.Shehasaslenderneck.Butusuallyherdressisconservative,becauseMioisashygirl.Eventhough,manypeopleshoutatherthat(应该为manypeoplecallher)“MissAkiyama”.Herlegsareslender.ButIstillthinksheisverygorgeous.(六)MyclassmateOh,doyouthinkthisboyisreallyill-looking?Heismyclassmateinschool.HisnameisDaiShunxin.Doyouthinkhisfacejustlikesapieceofsquareandwhitepaper?Helooksverypoor.Hishairismattedandbrown.Hehasacrewcut.Hiseyesaren’twateryatall,andthey’refishlike.Hisnoseisalsoill-looking,andit’sahookednose.Hehasjaggedteethandhisteetharen’tveryclean.Heisbended,sohelooksveryshort.Heisuglybutheusuallyhasasunnysmile.Thoughheisreallyill-lookingandeverybodyusuallylaughsathim,hestudiesveryhard!(七)MyfavoritepersonSheisverygorgeouseverywhere.Shehasadimpledface.It’sverylovely,well-featured.Andherhairstyleiscurly,it’sshortandkindofchestnut.Hereyesaredewy.Hernoseisshortbutbeautiful.Hermouthisfull,andthereareeventeeth.Herbackisstiff,soshelookslikea(加上number)“threee”.Shehasaslimfigure,sosheisgood-looking.Herheightislong(身高应为tall)butnottootall.Shealwayswearsatidydress,andhersmileisfriendly.Sheismyfavoriteperson—BaubuzhenLin.（八）MybestfriendSheismybestfriend,calledWangLinyutong.Herfaceisthin,andbigfeatured.Andshealwayshasdimple(应为dimples)whenshesmiles.Herhairstyleisshortandstraight.Andshehasfringes.Herhairisjet-black.Hereyesarewatery.Shehasasmallmouth.Herteetharecapped.Shelookslike(去掉like)pretty.Shealwayswearswell-dressed(sheisalwayswell-dressed).Sheissobeautiful.Sheismybestfriend,WangLinyutong.Doyoulikeher?
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人物：friend,classmate,father,mother,cousin,deskmate,brother teacher....外貌：beautiful lovely ugly(丑陋的)hair eye (her hair is long and her eyes are big.)性格：friendly， be strict with sb be kind to talented(有天分的) creative(天才的) outstanding(杰出的)
