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在平平淡淡的日常中，大家或多或少都会接触过作文吧，作文根据体裁的不同可以分为记叙文、说明文、应用文、议论文。那么你有了解过作文吗？以下是我整理的中考英语的作文，希望能够帮助到大家。
初三中考在即。师生的复习应该进入一个非常专题化的时期。如何写好一篇60字的作文，争取18分的最大值，显然已经引起了师生极大的重视。原因很明显，本年度是中考有史以来作文分值最高的一年，要求也是最高、最细的一年，所以分差增大，原来最多不差三四分的作文，弄不好很可能差十分以上，十分!对于中考来说这可是个了不起的数字!那么如何提高作文得高分的能力?当然可以只回答一个字练。目标有了，最重要的就是方法了。至少我们应该注意作文的基本要求和基本技巧。
60字的作文，非常有限的文字里要说明白说清楚一件事或一个人物或者一个观点，并不是一件很容易的事情。所以更要注意结构、要求和技巧。
60字的作文最好先从结构上练起，一般要分这样五个层次：
1)开始句2)向主体过度句 3)主体叙述 4)向结尾过度 5)结尾。
第一层开始句起着点题的作用，60字的作文一定要开门见山。也就是第一句就能让人感觉到你将要写什么。但是往往是概括性地笼统地指出。所以往往是一句话就解决问题。第二层往往是在第一层的基础上具体指出某人或某事。第三层就这个某人或某事进行详细的叙述或议论或描写。但一般以3至4句为宜。因为中考作文的字数是60至80字之间。不足和超过都要扣分。所以应该及时向结尾过渡，完成第四层，多半以谈感觉为主。在主体叙述和结尾之间起着承上启下的作用。但也应该一句话解决问题。过渡的梯子搭好了，也就能够圆滑地圆满地结尾了。结尾的一句话往往是感慨、感想、感叹之类的句子。这样6至8句的作文，每句平均10字左右 (每个句子的字数根据含义的需要调整)，最后写好的作文就应该是在60至80字之间了。
在我的眼中，我的初中英语老师是一个穿梭于课堂之中幽默的化身。
我的初中英语老师身材瘦小，一头卷发，头发上总是喜欢戴发夹。夏天，她喜欢穿休闲裙，下面往往搭配一双阿迪达斯的板鞋。
我的初中英语老师很严格。每当早读时，她一走进教室，我们便知道今天要听写英语单词了。我们拿本子的速度很慢，她就会说：“快点嘛！真的是，叫你们不把自己的听写本放好。”单词听写完后，我们总是要讨论自己听写得如何。这时她就会说：“你们能不能安静一点，再不安静的人，我就扣操行分了！”但是每次说完话后，总是会有同学还要说话，只不过把音量调小了很多。可是老师的.耳朵尖，每次都能听见，便生气地说：“A和B，我用语言告诉你们不要说话，你们偏不听，你们是不是需要我付出行动？”A和B同学就使劲摇头，老师看见后会说“你们话多，上课时就多回答问题吧！”上课时，每当有同学太活泼，老师就会十分严厉地说：“X同学禁言十分钟！”
我的初中英语老师很幽默。记得有一次，老师教我们读“沙滩”的英语单词，老师教的很认真，说：“记住，要读长音。”我当时并没有搞懂长音和短音的区别，老师请我起来朗读时，班上许多同学都在笑，我十分茫然。老师说：“你读错了。”还告诉我，如果读成了短音，就变成了另外一个单词——“母狗。”如果说“我要去沙滩”人家外国人就会听成“我要去母狗”！听到这里，我的脸刷一下就变红了。从此以后，我明白了短音和长音区别很大，英语发音很重要。
亲爱的初中英语老师，您用您的幽默教会了我更多的知识，您用您的严格让我做更好的自己。
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing some things for it. We are all polite to our teachers. (In class, we listen careful to them./When we meet them, we always say hello to them./…)We also respect the old. For example, we help them cross the streets.
We are always ready to help each other.(When one has difficulty with his studies, others will help him at once./...)We often show our love to those in trouble. Last month, the students of my class donated money to the earthquake-hit areas.
Besides, we plant trees to protect the environment and make our city more beautiful.
Nantong is my hometown. I will do my best to turn Nantong into a civilized city.
Zhang Tong
“叮铃铃'，一位老师踏着铃声走进教室，清了清嗓子，喊道："Standup。”没错，他就是我可爱的英语老师。他有一颗宛如“光头强”一般的锃亮的脑袋，两个眼睛不大不小，却因太过疲劳，带上了一对“迷你车轮”，他身材偏瘦，也不是太高，但看上去却很精神。
英语老师上课搞笑，幽默，却又令我们受益匪浅。瞧，他又开始讲作业了。“对，下一题。”他话音未落，我便开始插嘴了：“does，does，does。”我兴奋地大叫三声，一脸兴奋地望着老师，而他却一言不发，快步走到我身边，眼睛瞪得铜铃大小，望着我：“再说一遍。”还好我经验丰富，看到他似笑非笑的眼神，立马改口：“哦，不对不对，是is，is。”“呼，吓死我了，幸亏我反应快，要不就挂了。”我心中暗想道。
“哈哈哈……”，但还没等我喘口气，周围便传来了一阵哄笑，瞬间一种不好的感觉遍布全身，后背也不自觉地出了一身冷汗。只见老师一只手朝我脸伸来，轻轻捏住我的右眼皮，愠怒道：“呵，你自己好好看看。”说完，便把手缩了回去，轻拍了一下我的脑袋：“看清楚再回答。”唉，又错了。
有了刚才的教训，我便乖乖地把嘴巴闭起来，一言不发。不一会老师便注意到我的情况，又开玩笑说：“这会学乖了，不插嘴了？被揪一下就不敢说了，真是胆小。”我听了，鼓起勇气，又积极回答起来。就这样，英语课就在一阵又一阵欢笑声不知不觉地度过了。
这，就是我的英语老师了，一位幽默风趣而又善于开导学生的老师。
1. 动笔之前，认真审题
《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。
2. 围绕中心，拟定提纲
书面表达评分原则有四条：
(1)内容要点;
(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;
(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;
(4)上下文的连贯性。
由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是，要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。
1.内容完整，语句流畅，无语法错误，书写规范，给9-10分；
2.内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分；
3.内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分；
4.只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，只有个别句子可读或不知所云，给0-2分。
从个评分标准来看，它对考生的作文要求有四点：
1、内容要完整。
2、语句流畅。
3、没有语法错误。
4、书写规范。能达到上述要求的作文，都会得到相应的高分。
所以，在写作文的时候，大家要牢记这些要求。
要做到内容完整，我们首先要认清看好题目的要求，抓住要点，注意文体。我们可以在写作之前好好构思一下，自己将从几个方面来写。是否能将所有内容都包含在内。在写完之后，再检查一遍。看看有没有内容的缺失。
要做到语句的流畅，这就要求有扎实的英语基本功。在平时的积累上，注意一些语义的表达方法。要尽量使用自己能够正确运用的语句和表达方式。注意句子之间的连贯性。这不仅仅指从语法上，也指句意上的连贯。
在初中阶段，考生应注意语法点有：动词单三形式，时态（包括：现在进行时，一般过去时，将来时），定语从句（此项语法建议考生尽量不要使用），语态，单复数，主谓一致，冠词等还有一些表达方式。比如，我非常喜欢足球。考生经常会写成I very like football.这样的错误一定要避免。
佳丽子伊
话题一：个人情况 人物介绍 1、假如你在2008奥运会期间碰到外国朋友，请你介绍进入NBA美国球队的中国球员易建联的情况。 温馨提示：主题鲜明、语句通顺、意思连贯、适当发挥、拼写正确、书写工整。字数80左右。易建联 生日 1987.10.27 出生地 广东 身高 2.12米 经历 2003年他成为大学生college) 2000年1月入选中国国家篮球队(National Basketball Team) 2007年7月进入美国NBA，继姚明后的第二个中国球员 爱好 他喜欢听流行音乐、玩电脑。 其他 现在还在努力学习英语。Yi Jianlian ,a famous basketball player, is from Guangdong, China. He was born on October 27th.1987. He is 2.12 meters tall. This handsome boy became a college student in 2003.He was chosen to play for the National Basketball Team in January, 2004. This young man is the second Chinese player in NBA after Yao Ming. In his spare time, he likes listening to pop music and playing computer games. Now he is trying his best to learn English well.09中考英语话题作文预测范文 22、（福建莆田）假如你是李华，你从报纸上看到2008北京奥运会志愿者的招聘广告。请你用英文写封简短的应聘信，介绍自己的情况（见下表）表示愿意为奥运会做一些工作，请组委会给予考虑，并能尽早予以答复，词数：80左右。 姓名 李华 年龄 16 简历 我市某中学学生 爱好 绘画、体育、唱歌、演讲、英语口语 获奖情况 2007年12月获我市中学生英语演讲比赛一等奖 身体状况 健康 联系电话 提示词汇：1.志愿者voluteer 2.作为work as 3.答复reply to 4.比赛contest Sir/Madam, I read your ad. In the newspaper yesterday._____________________________________________ Yours sincerely Li Hu Sir/Madam, I read your ad. in the newspaper yesterday. I'm writing to tell you that I'd like to work as a volunteer for the 2008 Beijing Olympics. My name is Li Hua. I'm sixteen. I have many hobbies, such as drawing, sports, singing, speeches, and spoken English. I am proud that I won the first prize in our city's English Speech Contest for Middle School Student in December, 2007.In fact I'm healthy and strong. If I am lucky enough to become a volunteer, I will try my best to do this job well. Please reply to me soon. My telephone number is . Yours sincerely Li Hu09中考英语话题作文预测范文33、（福建泉州）初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来，在你获取知识的同时，你的外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯…都有了一定的改变吧！请你一定以(How I Change)为题，写一篇短文，告诉我们你的变化好吗？字数在80词左右。 温馨提示：1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。2.这些词汇也许对你有帮助:hobby, habit, used to, enjoy oneself3.短文开头已经为你写好（字数不计入总数），请你接着往下写。 How I Change My life has changed a lot in the past three years. … 范文两篇： How I Change My life has changed a lot in the past three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was a short and shy girl with long hair. I often listen to music at home. But now I like to make friends and take part in all kinds of activities. I prefer running with my classmates. So I'm becoming much healthier than before. Not only my parents but also my teachers are satisfied with me. How I Change My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me. Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better and keep healthier.09中考英语话题作文预测范文44、（四川泸州）请根据下面所提供的提示词语和图片，以My sister 为题写一篇短文。 1．提示词语： cute, big eyes, small mouth, wear glasses, hair, medium height, kind of thin, like dancing, sports, captain of the tennis team 2．要求： （1）所提供的提示词语全部用上，顺序可以打乱（2）词数：60词左右； （3）行文：规范、语法正确、上下文连贯自然。 3．注意：（1）标题和第一句话已为你写好；（2）不得用自己或他人的真实姓名。 My sister This is a picture of my sister, Alice. _________________参考作文： My sister This is a picture of my sister, Alice. She likes dancing very much. My sister is very cute. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. She always wears glasses. She has long hair. And she is of medium height. She's kind of thin. She likes sports, too. She's the captain of the tennis team.
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1. MyselfI am … , I am … years old . I look thin and tall . I like English very much . I like playing basketball and listening to music. I hope I can learn English well and go into the high school.2.My familyI have a very happy family.There are five people in my family.They are my father, my mother, my brother,my sister and I.My father is a farmer,my mother is a farmer, too.They are very kind.My brother is a worker,he is very hard.My sister and I are students.We are very hard-working.3.My friendI have many friends. ** * is my best friends .He/she is short with long hair. He is interesting and outgoing.She/He likes studying. He wants to be a teacher in the future .4.My teacherIn my school life,I have many teachers. Mrs *** is my favourite teacher. She teaches us English. She’s tall. She always has sweet smile on her face. She is very kind and friendly to all the students. We all love her very much!5. My school life I am a student in a middle school.During my school day,I am very busy.I get up at 6:00 everyday.I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon.After class, I often play games with my classmates .Then, I do my homework by myself.That’s my school day.6.My hobbyMy hobby is collecting stamps.I think collecting stamps is very interesting and educational.I have been collecting stamps for six years.I spent lots of money collecting stamps. Would you like to enjoy my stamps.I believe you will like them.7. My fatherMy father is a farmer ,he is tall with short hair. He is always very busy ,he works in the field all the year .He hardly has a rest ,I decide to study well and make him happy. I won’t let him down .My motherMy mother is a good wife and good mother, she is hard –working ,she is always busy ,she has to make the bed ,clean the yard ,feed animals ,cook for us and so on ,I think she is very great. I love her very much.8.My favorite seasonThere are four seasons in a year. My favorite season is spring.In spring, every thing begins to grow. The days get warmer and warmer. The trees turn green and the flowers come out. We also can go on a trip in spring .I like spring best.10.My favourite SubjectMy favourite subject is English. It’s very interesting and useful. If you study English well, you can talk with other people in English-speaking countries. So I often practice speaking English as possible as I can. Do you like English?11.My favourite pop starOf all the pop stars,I like Hanhong best .Although she isn`t very beautiful, she sings very well. She is kind and friendly. Her songs make me feel happy and excited. I like her very much.12.My favourite animalI love animals.My favourite animal is the koala bear. He is from Australia.He sleeps during the day.But at night ,he gets up and eats leaves.He’s a little shy. I like it very much.13.My healthy lifestyleI often walk to school .I exercise every day .My eating habits are pretty good . I try to eat a lot of vegetables and fruits every day ,and I sleep eight hours every night. My good healthy lifestyle helps me to study better.14. My dreamEveryone has own dream.My dream is to be a reporter,because I like talking with other people.I think I will meet many interesting people,and I can learn a lot of interesting things.From now on,I will study harder and harder.I hope my dream will come true one day.15.My roomI have a small room ,there are many books on the table andthere is also a clock on the table.there’re some beautiful pictures on the wall. My room is always clean. My mum helps me clean it everyday. I love my room very much.16.My good habitEveryone has many good habits.Now let me tell you my good habit.I often get up very early and keep doing morning exercise. I read all kinds of books for two hours every day. And I often help my parents do the housework in my free time.I think these habits are very good for me.I will keep them all the time.17. My hometownMy hometown is zhongwei .She has a long history.There, people are very friendly.And the food is very dedicious and cheap. There are many places of interest such as shapotou and high temple are very beautiful .I love my hometown very much18.Library rulesLibrary is a public place that we can read many books and magazines.Here are some library rules:First, keep the library clean and tidy. Second, protect the library books well. Next, return the books on time. Then,don’t smoke,eat or talk. Finally, don’t make any noises.I hope everyone can obey these library rules.19.Talk about your WeekendI am a student, and I am in my third year in a middle school. I’m very busy with my lessons everyday.I am free only on weekend. So I usually have to spend three or four hours in my studying .I often do some washing on Saturday afternoon. In the evening ,I watch TV with my family.If the weather is fine, I often go out to play games with my friend on Sundays. Sometimes I also help my parents do some cooking . After supper, I read English for an hour ,then go to bed early. Because I have to go to school the next day.20.What do you do in your free time?I am very happy in my free time, because I can do the things what I want to do , and because I don’t have to go to school and I have no homework. So,I often play basketball with my friend,I often read story books and watch TV in my free time.21.When you make friends, what is important to you?How to make friends? First, I think honest is very important to me. Second, Help others all the time. Third, they should be polite each other, shouldn’t argue with others.Finally, they are lively and friendly.22.Please make some rules for your class.Our class is very well,because we have strict rules.For example, Don’t eat in class. Don’t shout in class.Don’t run in the classroom. Don’t ride the bike .Don’t fight . Please listen to teachers carefully.
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