燕然铭石
Battles between American Indians and white men came about because they oppressed them.改为：......because the latter oppressed the formerEvery physician will agree that his/her patient comes first unless he is unusually selfish.改为：......unless a physician is unusually selfish 或者 ......unless he/she is unusually selfishHe told my brother that he was no longer his friend.改为：......that they were no longer friends (with each other)Carson was one of my students, who came late for class that snowy Monday.这句话有歧义，但没有指代错误。不用改。避免歧义：Carson was the only one in my class who came late on that snowy Monday.Melville visited Hawthorne while he was American consul in Liverpool.改为：......while working as American consul in Liverpool (Melville as American consul) ......, who was American consul in Liverpool (Hawthorne as American consul)
念念花语
1) a plane flying in the sky 2) and (he is )a man you can rely on 3) We have great faith and (hope on) her4) If (you are)interested in painting,5) looking- looks 6) sign his name - signtheir names 7) his deeds - what he did 8) it- his wound 9) (she put )all the things 10) She put into her bag the picture books she had bought for her children.11) she was ( a ) charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman. 12) That cat with five kittens belongs to my neighbor.13) do - doing 14) being - was
老李重庆
1：一般时态问题如：is写成was2:人称：he写成she,her写成him等3：词性：本来应该是final写成了finally等（当你实在找不出来的时候，可以找找这句话是否有这样的词）4：语态，要熟知what,that,which,who,whom等的用法5：动词的用法：什么时候用do,todo,doing要搞清楚6：特殊情况;so/such/asso大多数后面接as.没有returnback或者comebackreturn的用法.itis与its的区别等等以上的那些只是比较常见的（当你不会改某一句时，看看是否后符合以上情况的），某些特殊的还是要平时的积累多练
吃吃吃吃吃Chen
你是找对人了，我就英语好，谢谢~~~I. Correct the following: 1). Looking out of the window, a plane flying in the sky. 2). Fred is energetic and capable,who is a man you can rely on. 3). We have great faith and high hopes to her. 4). If be interested in painting, a course can be taken at the evening school. 5). The old man hunched forward. His head tilted at an angle. His eyes were half closed, looking very sleepy. 6). Those who wish to take linguistics are expected to sign these name on this sheet of paper. 7). A man is judged not only by what he said but also by his did. 8). He was beated down by a jeep, but it was not serious. 9). To get ready for the trip, all the things what he needed were put in his suitcase. 10). She bought several picture books and put them into her bag, which wew she intended to give to her children. 11). We all thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman. 12). That cat belongs my neighbor with five kittens. 13). There are two students in the classroom are doing exercises. 14). The result is that he lost the presidential election.
Nightwish阳光
It’s an interesting question I have to say,because I spend most of time in college to find out the answer. When we talkabout life, there are always some words cominng into our minds, like dreams, ambitions,money, goals and some words like those, which look very meaningful but useless in thisquestion. I try many ways to figure out the question, even make a mathematicequation and solve in a micro-economic way. At last, I realize that there is nostandard answer for everything, but in my case, I think it is happiness. Life isshort and there is no time machine. I still don’t know what the optimal answer isin my world, but I do know what kind of man I want to be; like the famoussaying in “How the Steel Was Tempered”: When you look back at your life, youwill have no regrets over any time you had wasted. Nor will you feel ashamed of not accomplishing anything.拙见，仅供参考。
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