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篇一:英语道歉信范文及常用句式

英语道歉信范文及常用句式

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌,道歉信要写得坦率,诚恳。

道歉信通常包括三部分内容:1、表示歉意,道歉的原由;2、出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施;3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。

写作"三步曲":

表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉,希望得到理解。注意:

理由要尽量合理,违反生活常识将导致扣分;尽量提供一个合适的补救办法,使行文更加顺畅。

范文解析:

Directions: You were unable to attend Mr. Smith's examination on International Business English Writing because you got sick that morning. Write a letter to express

the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.

Write the letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your own name at end of the letter. Use "Wang Hua" instead. Do not write the address.

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination on International Business English Writing you gave last Friday. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital. Please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.

I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make-up examination. I will come to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience caused.

Sincerely yours,

Wang Hua

◆常用句式:

1、I am writing to apologize for … /I am writing to say sorry for

我写这封信是因……向你致歉。

2、I would like to give you my apology for…

对于……我向你道歉。

3、Please accept my sincere apology for…

关于……请接受我真诚的道歉。

4、I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but believe I had no

Intention to…

对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……

5、Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.

请原谅我说话欠妥。

6、I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.

为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。

7、Please accept my apologies for my oversight. 请原谅我的疏忽。 8、Please allow me to say sorry again. 请允许我再次表示歉意。

9、I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.

我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑,并接受我的道歉。

10、Once again, I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.

对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。

篇二:英文道歉信句子模板

英语道歉信范文及常用句式 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后要立即写信给对

方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌,道歉信要写得坦率,诚恳。道歉信通常包括三部分内容:1、表示歉意,道歉的原由;2、出现差错的原因,提出弥

补措施;3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,

还会增进彼此的感情。

写作三步曲:

表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉,希望得到理解。注意: 理由要尽量合理,违反生活常识将导致扣分;尽量提供一个合适的补救办法,使行文更

加顺畅。

范文解析:

directions: you were unable to attend mr. smiths examination on international

business english writing because you got sick that morning. write a letter to express

the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize. write the letter with no less than 100 words. do not sign your own name at end

of the letter. use wang hua instead. do not write the address.dear mr. smith,

i am indeed very sorry that i missed the examination on international business

english writing you gave last friday. i feel awful about it and want you to know what

happened that day.i suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to

send me to the hospital. please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill. sincerely yours,

wang hua

◆常用句式:

1、i am writing to apologize for … /i am writing to say sorry for 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。

2、i would like to give you my apology for… 对于……我向你道歉。

3、please accept my sincere apology for… 关于……请接受我真诚的道歉。 (转载于:英文道歉信句子模板)

4、i am indeed very sorry for what i said/did, but believe i had nointention to…

对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……

5、please forgive me for a stupid choice of words. 请原谅我说话欠妥。

6、i feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. 为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。

7、please accept my apologies for my oversight. 请原谅我的疏忽。 8、please allow

me to say sorry again. 请允许我再次表示歉意。

9、i sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept

my apologies.

我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑,并接受我的道歉。

10、once again, im sorry for any inconvenience caused/you have sustained.

对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。篇二:高中英语 道歉信模板道歉信

一.必背句子

para1:表示歉意

1. i’m very sorry for not being able to visit beijing with you next weekend.

i’m writing to apologize to you for it.

2. the reasons why i can’t go with you are as follows.para2:解释原因,提出补救办法

1. just now i received a call from my cousin, who went to australia for further

study last year.

2. he told me that he would be back to china at 8 am on saturday, and he hoped

i could pick him up at the airport with his family.

3. we haven’t seen each other for a year, so i think i am supposed to meet him.

4. i make an apology to you for any inconvenience caused, and i hope you can

understand my situation.

5. let’s make it another time. how about may day? para3:再次致歉,希望得到理解

1. i would appreciate it if you could accept my apology. looking forward to your

early reply.

二.道歉信作文模板

假如你是王涛, 由于母亲生病住院,你要照顾她,所以你无法参加美国朋友 tom 本周 六

下午的生曰聚会。你已寄出生日礼物(张杰的最新 cd) 。请你写一封电子邮件,内容 如下:

1 表达歉意 2 说明原因 3 送上祝福 注意: 1.词数为 100 字左右。 2.可适当增加细节,

以使行文连贯。dear tom,

how is everything going with you? i’m terribly sorry that i’m not able to go to your birthday party this saturday

afternoon. i’m in beijing now because my mother is seriously ill and will have an

operation here. she is in bad need of my care these days, so i’m staying here to

take care of her in the hospital. i wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well with the party. by

the way, i have sent you the latest cd of zhang jie. i hope you’ll like this birthday

present.

i’m looking forward to seeing you soon.yours,

wang tao篇三:道歉信英文模板及翻译dear_____,

i am writing this letter to express my apology that ______________.i feel terribly sorry about this. once again, i am very sorry for any inconvenience caused. i will be really

appreciated if you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.yours sincerely

_________

亲爱的_____,(对方姓名)

我写这封信以表达我的道歉 ______________(道歉原因)。对此我深感抱歉。我再次对给您造成的任何不便深感歉意,希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。 谨启

_________(自己姓名)篇四:2016考研复习:考研英语道歉信万能写作模板更多精彩,复制打开链接:/kaoyan2016考研复习:考研英语道歉信万能写作模板相信各位2016考研的同学,大部分都会将作文放到最后的冲刺阶段来复习。说到考研英

语作文的复习,当然少不了背诵模板,模板背的多,在考场上也能发挥不小的作用。所以,

大家分享一些2016考研英语小作文万能写作模板: 道歉信

道歉信是由于自己的疏忽失误而向对方表达歉意并出于诚意写出具体弥补办法。第一段

首先亮出写作目的并简单阐述该物品的状态:i am writing to make an apology to you for+

句子(表明事件因由)。

第二段列出出错的原因及具体补救办法:to make up my fault, ...... i will......as

a token of my apology i sincerely apologize for my careless mistake as well as for

any inconvenience thus caused to you.

第三段再一次表达歉意:once again, i am sorry for my carelessness. looking forward

to your reply.

应用文中的这三类投诉信、建议信、道歉信,每一类都有其写作的范式和具体的内容要

求,并且语言要求简单准确,所以这需要大家清楚每一类文章的一些常用语句,在平常积累

背诵,在考场上信手拈来。要想在考研英语作文上获得高分,也不能完全依靠模板,平时还是要多多练习一下写作,

背诵的一些模板、写作佳句等,要学会运用才算是真正掌握,才能在2016考研英语的考场上

用得恰到好处。

篇三:英文致歉信_范文

道歉信 Letter of Apology

我们在工作或生活中,有时难免会犯一些错误,写封致歉信就显得很有必要。道歉信通常包括以下内容:表示歉意;道歉的原由;出现差错的原因;提出弥补措施;请求原谅。写道歉信的语言要诚挚,解释的.理由要真实,不要显出丝毫的虚情假意。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。

写作"三步走":

表示歉意->说明具体原因、提出补救办法->再次致歉、希望得到理解

Tips:

在写作过程中,尽可能提供比较合理的理由。如果违反生活常识将导致扣分。

在解释完原因后,尽量提供一个合适的补救办法,使行文更加完满。

订阅收藏《考研英语写作范文100篇》系列文章

(1)Directions:

You are invited to a dinner at a friend's house, but you are not able to attend because of the preparation for a coming examination. Write a letter to your friends to express your apology, explain your reason, and suggest a meeting at another time.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Do not write the address.

范文:

Dear Anne,

Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don't hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you.

Please allow me to say sorry again.

Regards,

Li Ming

译文:

亲爱的安:

感谢你邀请我于明日晚上与你和你的家人共进午餐。可是,我非常遗憾地告诉你我无法赴约,因为我将忙于准备后天的一门重要考试。错过了这么一个欢乐的聚会我深感遗憾,我希望你们能度过一个愉快的时光。对了,在我考试后我们可以见一面么?如果可以的话请随

时给我打电话,我非常期待能和你愉快地聊天。

请允许我再一次致歉。

您真诚的,

李明

闪光词汇及词组:

occupy: v. 占用,占

get-together: n. 聚会,联欢会

hesitate: v. 犹豫,踌躇

drop sb. a line: 给某人打一个电话

preferable: adj. 更好的,更可取的

long for sth: 渴望

万能句型:

Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot...

I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of...

Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterwards?

If so, please don't hesitate to drop me a call about your preferable date.

Please allow me to say sorry again.

(2)Directions:

You failed to finish an important task assigned by your professor because of a severe illness. Write a letter to your professor tp express your apology, explain your reason, and suggest a solution to make up the loss.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Do not write the address.

范文:

Dear Prof. Patent,

I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago. For the past few days I have been in hospital with a continuous fever, which has thus prevented me from any academic activity. I hereby submit the doctor's note.

I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better.

Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.

Yours faithfully,

Li Ming

译文:

尊敬的Patent教授:

我非常遗憾地告知您我没有完成您上周布置的读书报告,因为几天前我突然生病了。过去的几天中我一直持续高烧,住在医院,因此无法进行任何学术活动。随信是医生的诊断书。 如果您能再给一周时间来完成它我将感激不尽,因为现在我的身体正在好转。 希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。

您真诚的,

李明

闪光词汇及词组:

assign: v. 分配,指派

fall upon sb: 降临到某人身上

continuous: adj. 持续的

prevent sb from sth/doing sth: 使某人不能做某事

hereby: adv. 因此,据此

submit: v. 提交,递交

obliged: adj. 感激的

grant: v. 同意,准予

万能句型:

I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete...due to...

I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task.

Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology.

Apologize letter __ business English_ by LQY

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing this letter to apologize to you. I’m so sorry that we made a mistake about the shipment of vacuum cleaners.

Those vacuum cleaners we sent to you were meant to be sent to European countries, but as the old worker was retired, the new one wasn’t so experienced. Besides, the model number and the price of goods in March and July are so similar that the worker mistaken them.

I am awfully sorry for this and we promise you a replacement shipment. We will also give a 10%

discount to compensate.

I do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you and I will try my best to avoid the same accident happening again.

道歉信是人们经常使用的一种书信文体,用以表达自己的歉意,查字典范文大全特意为大家整理了关于道歉信范文的相关材料,希望对您的工作和生活有帮助。

Letter of Apology

Ⅰ. Sample Study

Sample I

Dear Susan,

I’m very sorry that I was out when you came to see me yesterday evening. I’m afraid I’d gone to the pub with some friends and didn’t get back until 12 o’clock. I wish I had known you were in Luoyang as you could have come with us. It would have been a good introduction to the night life!Anyway, I will call on you at 10 o’clock on Saturday morning at your hotel. We can have the day together, if you have nothing else planned? I’ll show you some of the places of interest that you may not have seen.

Please let me know if you will be available on Saturday morning.

Best wishes

Chen Cheng

Sample II

Dear Mary,

I’m very sorry for not having replied to your July 6th letter sooner. When your letter arrived, I was in Beijing. As my secretary couldn’t forward it to me, it has been lying on my desk until I got back.

Thank you for all your news. It is good to know that your company has agreed to sign the contract to continue the cooperation with us. And we surely will have a bigger success in the near future.

Look forward to catching up and once again apologize for the delay.

Sincerely,

Tom

英语道歉信范文及常用句式

道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌,道歉信要写得坦率,诚恳。

道歉信通常包括三部分内容:1、表示歉意,道歉的原由;2、出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施;3、请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。

写作"三步曲":

表示歉意→说明具体原因、提出补救办法→再次致歉,希望得到理解。

注意:

理由要尽量合理,违反生活常识将导致扣分;尽量提供一个合适的补救办法,使行文更加顺畅。范文解析:

Directions: You were unable to attend Mr. Smith's examination on International Business English Writing because you got sick that morning. Write a letter to express the reasons for not being able to attend it and apologize.

Write the letter with no less than 100 words. Do not sign your own name at end of the letter. Use "Wang Hua" instead. Do not write the address.

Dear Mr. Smith,

I am indeed very sorry that I missed the examination on International Business English Writing you gave last Friday. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.

I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital. Please find enclosed a copy of the medical bill.

I sincerely hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. I would appreciate your allowing me to take a make-up examination. I will come to your office during your office hour on Monday to discuss this possibility with you. Once again, I apologize for any inconvenience caused.

Sincerely yours,

Wang Hua

◆常用句式:

1、I am writing to apologize for … /I am writing to say sorry for

我写这封信是因……向你致歉。

2、I would like to give you my apology for…

对于……我向你道歉。

3、Please accept my sincere apology for…

关于……请接受我真诚的道歉。

4、I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but believe I had no

Intention to…

对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要……

5、Please forgive me for a stupid choice of words.

请原谅我说话欠妥。

6、I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened.

为此我感到非常内疚,所以想告诉你实情。

7、Please accept my apologies for my oversight.

请原谅我的疏忽。

8、Please allow me to say sorry again.

请允许我再次表示歉意。

9、I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apologies.

赔礼道歉英语

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小小小花花儿

英语道歉信范文带翻译Dear David:I am afraid that you will think me unpardonably negligent in not having answered your letter dated 7, December sooner, but when I have told you the reason, I trust you will be convinced that the neglect was excusable. When your letter arrived, I was just in Hong Kong.As my family could not forward it to me during my absence, it has been, therefore, lying on my desk until the moment when I took it up. Now the first thing I have to hasten to do is to write to you these few lines to express my deep regret.I enjoyed many pleasant sights during my trip. I shall be pleased to give you an account to of them when I see you next.亲爱的大卫:我怕你会觉得我不可原谅过失没有回答你的来信7日12月早,但是当我告诉你原因,我相信你会相信忽视是可以原谅的。你的信到的时候,我只是在香港。作为我的家庭不能转告我我不在的时候,它一直在,因此,躺在我的桌子上,直到那一刻,我欣然接受。现在我要赶紧做的第一件事就是给你写信这些几行表达我深深的遗憾。我喜欢许多愉快的景象在我的旅行。我将很高兴给你一个账户,当我看到你下一个。

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歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事,给别人带来了麻烦或损失,发觉后要立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。道歉是一种礼貌, 道歉信 要写得坦率,诚恳。本文是我为大家整理的,仅供参考。 英文道歉信 范文 带翻译篇一: Dear Anne, Thank you for your invitation to dinner at your home tomorrow evening. Unfortunately, it is much to my regret that I cannot join you and your family, because I will be fully occupied then for an important exam coming the day after tomorrow. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of such a happy get-together, and I hope that all of you enjoy a good time. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting afterward? If so, please don't hesitate to drop me a line about your preferable date. I do long for a pleasant chat with you. Please allow me to say sorry again. Regards, Li Ming 亲爱的安: 感谢你邀请我于明日晚上与你和你的家人共进午餐。可是,我非常遗憾地告诉你我无法赴约,因为我将忙于准备后天的一门重要考试。错过了这么一个欢乐的聚会我深感遗憾,我希望你们能度过一个愉快的时光。对了,在我考试后我们可以见一面么?如果可以的话请随时给我打电话,我非常期待能和你愉快地聊天。 请允许我再一次致歉。 您真诚的, 李明 英文道歉信范文带翻译篇二: Dear Prof. Patent, I am very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me a few days ago. For the past few days I have been in hospital with a continuous fever, which has thus prevented me from any academic activity. I hereby submit the doctor's note. I would be very much obliged if you could grant me another week for the task, as my health is turning better. Hope you can understand my situation and accept my apology. Yours faithfully, Li Ming 尊敬的Patent教授: 我非常遗憾地告知您我没有完成您上周布置的读书 报告 ,因为几天前我突然生病了。过去的几天中我一直持续高烧,住在医院,因此无法进行任何学术活动。随信是医生的诊断书。 如果您能再给一周时间来完成它我将感激不尽,因为现在我的身体正在好转。 希望您能理解我的处境并接受我的道歉。 您真诚的, 李明 英文道歉信范文带翻译篇三: Dear Mary, I’m very sorry for not having replied to your July 6th letter sooner. When your letter arrived, I was in Beijing. As my secretary couldn’t forward it to me, it has been lying on my desk until I got back. Thank you for all your news. It is good to know that your company has agreed to sign the contract to continue the cooperation with us. And we surely will have a bigger success in the near future. Look forward to catching up and once again apologize for the delay. Sincerely, Tom 亲爱的玛丽, 我很抱歉没有尽快回复您7月6日的来信。当你的信到达时,我在北京。当我的秘书不能转告我,已经躺在我的桌子上,直到我回来。 我非常感谢你的消息。很高兴知道你的公司已经同意签署合同与我们继续合作。我们肯定会有一个更大的成功在不久的将来。 期待迎头赶上,再次道歉。 真诚地,

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模板①Dear ________(对象),I am truly sorry that ________(道歉的原因).The reason is that ___________(介绍原因).Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my appologies and understand my situation.Yours Sincerely,Li Ming模板②Dear ________,I am excessively sorry to say/tell you that ①_____ (直接表达自己不能实现先前的愿望或约定).②Now, I am writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret_______ (表达歉意).③Please accept my sincere apology__________(诚恳希望对方能接受道歉). ④I fear you are displeased at _________(表达出自己的心情,并请求对方原谅).⑤I hope you will understand me and excuse me for__________(过渡句). ⑥Let me explain(开始介绍道歉的原因). ⑦The reason for my delay/absence was that _________(阐述自己当时的处境和情况). ⑧I had no way out because _______ (总结自己道歉的原因).⑨Therefore it’s not in my power to___________(希望下次再次实现愿望). ⑩Naturally, I want to suggest ____________. I shall be gladif you will kindly write and tell me when and where you____________(约定下次约会的时间和地点)We may meet again and I hope to see you soon.Sincerely Yours,Li Hua写好道歉信的关键在于措辞要朴实、委婉,语气要诚恳、真挚,解释要详细明了。例如"I’m excessively sorry"、"sincere apology"、"deep regret"等都是致歉之词,这就恰如其分地表达了写信人的真诚歉意。道歉信通常包括三部分内容:1.表示歉意,道歉的原由;2.出现差错的原因,提出弥补措施;3.请求原谅。语言要诚挚,解释的理由要真实。4.补充说明。客套话。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。范文Dear Mr. Brown,Much to my regret,I was unable to keep my engagement to meet you at the park gate. I fear you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I trust you will forgive me. Let me explain. My mother suddenly fell sick early yesterday morning, and I had to send her to hospital.I shall be gladif you will kindly write and tell me when and where we may meet again. I hope to see you soon.YoursSincerely,Li Ming1、道歉信中开头段常用句式和套话I am writing this letter to express my regret…我写这封信是想表达我的遗憾……I am writing to apologize for…我写信是为……道歉。I would like to give you my apology for…我想……向你道歉。I am very sorry to say that…我很抱歉……I must apologize about (not) doing sth…对于做了/没做……,我必须道歉。Please accept my sincere apology for…请接受我对于......的真诚道歉。I am writing to say sorry for…我写信是想对……说抱歉。I am terribly sorry, but…我很抱歉,但是……2、道歉信中结尾段常用句式和套话Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.我对于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。Please allow me to say sorry again.请允许我再一次说抱歉。Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.希望你们能够接受我的道歉,理解我的处境。I sincerely hope that you will be able to think in my position and accept my apologies.我真诚的希望你能够站在我的位置想一想,并且接受我的道歉。I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.我想让你知道我现在感觉多么的遗憾。I am sorry that I can’t… but trust that you will be able to understand.很抱歉我不能……,但我相信,你会理解的。配套练习1假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【思路分析】题目要求写一封道歉信,李华因不能和Bob一起去书店而向Bob 道歉,文章应使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。写作内容包括:表示歉意; 说明原因; 另约时间。注意使用连接词,使作文内容连贯。【参考范文】Dear Bob,I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.Yours,Li Hua【亮点说明】范文包括了所有要点内容,做到了语意连贯。范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble;目的状语从句so that we’ll have more time to read and select books;条件句If it’s convenient for you;省略句If not等,长短句结合,使内容显得更加丰富。【总结】此作文是常规的书信作文,要求写一封道歉信,是应用文的一种。写作的内容已经给出,表达歉意的同时,还要与对方另约时间。因此,不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时应注意涵盖所有要点,还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。配套练习2假如你是李华。上周,外教Shelley外出度假之前给你留言,让你为她喜欢的茉莉花浇水。你因故忘记为茉莉花浇水,导致茉莉花干死。你决定给Shelley写一封信,内容包括:1.表示歉意;2.解释原因和补偿措施;3.请求原谅。注意:1.词数100左右,开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:茉莉—jasmine【参考范文】Dear Shelley,I’m writing to apologize for not watering your jasmine, which caused its death, while you were away.Now let me explain what happened to me and my family.I was so busy preparing for the coming exam that I had no time for other things. What’s more, my mother had her ankle injured while she was walking, so I had to take good care of her, who stayed at home alone. That was why I failed to water your favorite plant. I would like to buy a new one as a compensation for your loss. Please forgive me.I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.Yours,Li Hua【思路分析】本篇书面表达要求写一封道歉信。写作时,应用第一人称,感情要真挚,语气应委婉。道歉这一话题与考生的日常生活息息相关,符合高考的命题趋势,充分体现了高考注重对考生语言交际能力的培养。根据试题说明,本文应分三个部分:第一段:开门见山,说明写信目的——向对方道歉。第二段:主要陈述因何事需要向对方道歉,并给出具体的补偿措施。第三段:再次表示歉意,希望得到对方的谅解。写作时注意语言要真挚。【写作素材】1.我写这封信是因……而道歉。I’m writing to apologize for/say sorry for...2.为做了某事我深表歉意I am really sorry for doing...3.某事发生的原因是……The reason why ...was that...4.没有时间做某事have no time for...5.那就是某事发生的原因。That was why...6.我真诚地希望你接受我的歉意。I sincerely hope you can accept my apologies.

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