kami麻麻
谈到成功时，对于实现成功的原因不同的人有不同的看法。有些人认为勤奋是成功必 备的素质，而另一些人则相信聪明人会实现成功。从我的角度来看，我认为毅力和勤奋对于 那些想要成功的人是必不可少的。 Firstly, perseverance let people step closely towards success. Most people want to make a big difference to prove their value. People who set their goal and keep moving would make their dream come true. However, there are some people who set their goal but they stop at the difficulty would fail in the end. I think the difference between success and failure is perseverance. If we have perseverance, even if we are not clever, we will make a great difference, but if we not, we are doomed to lose. As we all know, Edison is a great inventor in the world. However, before he invented the bulb, he kept trying for tens of thousands of times to find a suitable wire. Let us imagine, if he gave up at the 999th, then how he couldn’t become so successful. So, I strongly believe that perseverance produces success.
雯雯闯天涯
成功写出一篇英语作文，你觉得需要花掉你大学生活的几天时间呢?下面是我给大家整理的如何取得成功的大学英语作文，供大家参阅!
The first time in life? Then grasp your chance with your perfect performance on the dating night, by learning the following principle in heart.
Dress properly. While everyone wants to give an impressive debut on the first date, you should avoid wearing something too bizarre to be accepted. If you are still in school, a sportswear can fulfill your purpose. For businessman or grownups, casual clothes are recommended. Never put up your working uniforms,no matter how well you like that Armani suit. It is no work. A few accessories such as a pair of sunglasses or silver loops on the wrist can add up to the romance sphere.
Take a bath before dating. And if you like, spray a little perfume, but unless you're sure that he or she likes the smell,don't use ones that are too strong.
Watch your manner. You're no prince of the Scotland nor Cinderella in the legend. Proper manners will ensure a lasting relationship while bad ones scare away your sweetheart. And do make sure you do not boast about your fortune, for, not everyone are green addicts. And your way of smiling, or your greatestoath, should neither be "coy" nor "by St. Loy!" after the nun in Chaucer.
Be a little sensitive than merely innocent. Do make sure you do not intrude his or her privacy on the first date. For there maybe something deeply concealed within the inner core of every heart, of which the owner doesn't share often with anyone but his intimacy.
Finally, wish you good luck. May you get your hearts combined and start a new journey in the miracle of life and love. Stay tuned till a borderline is reached, and keep on through out the whole way.
简 评
看来第一次约会真是令人兴奋并紧张期待的。为第一次约会所提出的建议也是仁者见仁、智者见智。王永同学用词简单、结构精炼，读起来节奏快，例如：“Dress Properly....If you are still in school，a sportswear can fulfill your purpose.For businessman Orgrowmups，casual clothes are recommended.”这样的文章结构像是在提醒我们时不我待，要抓住机会，抓紧时间。
(点评教师：张雪波)
How to Succeed in a Job Interview
提纲
1.求职面试很重要。
2.求职面试要注意：言谈举止，衣着，信心，诚实。
Students who are about to graduate have to face the challenge of being interviewed while trying to find employment. People looking for ajob usually attach great importance to job interviews. Doing well in a job interview means a good chance of being employed. With little working experience, how can we succeed in a job interview?
In my opinion, firstly, we should leave the employers a good impression an what we were, how we talk as well as how we behave in public. Secondly, we should not be nervous, for over ncrvousness will lead to uncertainty of your ability. Being confident can bring you to success. When you are asked something about the job you want, you should answer it as fully as possible according to what you know. Thirdly, honesty is a virtue. Being honest about your present situation and never make any boastful statemeat.
I hope everyone will have a good chance and win success in the interview. Then all of us can get our ideal jobs.
The Factors One Needs to Gain Success
提纲
1.对于一些聪明的人来说成功并不是天生注定。
2.非智力因素与智力因素同样重要。
3.在学习上获得成功的秘诀。
It is widely believed that some people are born lucky and successful, because they possess high intelligence. But this is not true. High intelligence is not equal to success. Success lies in not only the intelligence factors but also the non-intelligence factors.
Non-intelligence factors are at least as important as intelligence factors, if not more than the latter. Success is built upon tremendous amount of study, practice and devotion. In addition, having a definite goal and knowing what to do next become more important. In fact, researchers have evidence that an intrinsic passion for one's work is a key factor for success.
According to my own experience, during our college years, having a good study habit is also important. Higber marks can't be gained by putting in more hours. Efficiency in study can help us learn more.
Therefore, I think success is brought about both by innate intelligence factors and by non-intelligence factors.
