垂杨紫陌
Greetings, my professor. I am a student on your Insurance English lessons this term. Could you please raise my score to B? I was studying hard on class, and did my exam equally seriously. And I did not miss a class. Though my exam score is not good enough, I was studying with my best efforts. Please. Thank you.
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小淘淘0312
Dear Professor. xx, I am xx, one of students in your course of Insurance English.Could you raise my grade to B? I have been listening carfully in your class, and complete the examination serriously, and never absent from your class. I have been studying hard even though the examination result might not be good. Thank you in advance. Best regards,xx (your name)
太仓站沈
Hello，dear professor.I am a student of your Insurance English course .In this term I concentrate on the lessons everyday，be serious with tests，and also have no absenteeism. I am working hard in learning though my exam results may not be so good.So ，please dear professor，could you give my score to go up to B?Many thanks！楼主，我把你“我的分数可以再提高到B么？”放到了最後，因为个人觉得一开始就把这句话亮给老师，老师会很反感。请楼主再细细斟酌一下。
