小老头and小胖子
有问题。
原句：Faye Wong is my favorite singer.I like Faye Wong because of her voice is as Clean as an angel and ethereal crooning as a valley bird.
王菲是我最喜爱的歌手，我喜欢王菲是因为她的嗓音如天使般纯洁，轻灵的嗓音如同布谷鸟一样。
Faye Wong is my favorite singer.I love Faye Wong because her voice is as clean as an angel and ethereal crooning as a valley bird.
解释：1.because of 换成because。
because是连词，引导从句，because of是复合介词，后面加名词或相当于名词的词、代词、动名词、what 从句等。
例如；
I didn't buy it because it was too expensive. 我没有买是因为它太贵了。
He lost his job because of his age. 由于年龄关系他失去了工作。
2.like换成love
搜的个人喜好而已。喜爱的话，love表达感觉更合适。like就没有那么强烈的感觉了。
以上个人建议，请按实际情况修改。
愿无悲喜2015
你好！My day is busy.In the morning,I get up at six.I brush my teeth and put on my clothes.Then I eat breakfast at half past six.At six fifteen I go to shool.I get to school at around seven o'clock.Classes begin at half past seven.After have two classes,I do sports at nine.And then I play game with my friend.In the afternoon,I eat lunch at twelve o'clock.I go shopping in the shop with my sister.School over at ten past four.I go home and get home at around five o'clock.At six o'clock,I eat dinner.Then I take a shower and do my homework.At nine,I watch TV.I go to bed at around ten o'clock.
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