北极星爱吃鱼
嫦娥奔月（其中一个版本）
changebenyue(one of the versions)
在远古的时候，天上突然出现了十个太阳。
In ancient times, ten suns suddenly appeared in the sky.
直晒得大地冒烟，老百姓实在无法生活下去了。
The sun was smoking, and the people could not live on.
有一个力大无比的英雄名叫后羿，他决心为老百姓解除这个苦难。
There was a powerful hero named Hou Yi who was determined to relieve the suffering of the people.
于是他登上昆仑山顶，运足气力，拉满神弓，一口气射下九个太阳。
So he went up to the top of Kunlun, filled his bow with strength, and shot down nine suns in one breath.
他对天上最后一个太阳说:"从今以后，你每天必须按时升起，按时落下，为民造福!"
He said to the last sun in the sky: "From now on, you must rise on time and fall on time for the benefit of the people! "
后羿为老百姓除了害，大伙儿都很敬重他。很多人拜他为师，跟他学习武艺。
After Yi for the common people, everyone respected him. Many people worshipped him as a teacher and learned martial arts from him.
有个叫逢蒙的人，为人奸诈贪婪。
There is a man called a lover, who is treacherous and greedy.
后羿的妻子嫦娥，是个美丽善良的女子。
After Yi's wife Chang E, is a beautiful and kind woman.
一天，昆仑山上的西王母送给后羿一丸仙药。
One day, the Western royal mother of Kunlun Mountain gave Houyi a pill of elixir.
据说，人吃了这种药不但能长生不老，还可以升天成仙。
It is said that people who take this medicine can not only live forever, but also ascend to heaven.
可是，后羿不愿意离开嫦娥，就让她将仙药藏了起来。
However, Hou Yi did not want to leave Chang 'E and let her hide the elixir.
这件事被逢蒙知道了，他一心想把后羿的仙药弄到手。
The matter was discovered by Feng Meng. He was bent on getting Houyi's elixir.
八月十五这天清晨，后羿带弟子出门了，逢蒙假装生病留了下来。
On the morning of August 15, Hou Yi took his disciples out and pretended to be ill.
到了晚上逢蒙手提宝剑闯进后羿家里，威逼嫦娥把仙药交出来。
In the evening, Meng Meng's hand-held sword broke into Houyi's house and forced Chang 'E to hand over the elixir.
嫦娥心里想：让这样的人吃了长生不老药，不是要害更多的人吗?
Chang E thought to himself: let such a person eat the elixir of immortality, is not the key more people?
嫦娥见逢蒙马上就要找到药，立刻疾步向前取出仙药，一口吞了下去。
Chang 'E saw that Meng was about to find the medicine immediately. He immediately took the elixir forward and swallowed it.
嫦娥吃了仙药，突然飘飘悠悠地飞了起来，她飞出了窗子，一直朝着月亮飞去。
Chang 'E took the elixir and suddenly floated up. She flew out of the window and flew all the way to the moon.
后羿外出回来，不见了妻子嫦娥，他焦急地冲出门外，只见皓月当空。
After Yi went out to return, missing his wife Chang 'E, he rushed out of the door anxiously, only saw the bright moon.
圆圆的月亮上树影婆娑，一只玉兔在树下跳来跳去。
On the round moon the shadow of the tree was dancing, and a rabbit was jumping around under the tree. And ...
妻子就站在一棵桂树旁深情地凝望着自己呢。"嫦娥!嫦娥!"后羿连声呼唤。
His wife was standing beside a Laurel tree, gazing fondly at herself. "Chang 'E! Chang 'E! " Hou Yi called out.
不顾一切地朝着月亮追去，可是他向前追三步，月亮就向后退三步，怎么也追不上。
Desperate to chase the moon, but he chased three steps forward, the moon three steps back, how can not catch up.
乡亲们很想念好心的嫦娥，在院子里摆上嫦娥平日爱吃的食品，遥遥地为她祝福。
The villagers miss the good Chang 'E very much and put Chang' E's favorite food in the yard. They bless her from afar.
从此以后，每年八月十五，就成了人们企盼团圆的中秋佳节。
Since then, August 15 every year, it has become people look forward to a reunion of the Mid-Autumn Festival.
我的臭熊熊
范文：Legend has it that Chang'e was Yi's wife. She shot nine suns to benefit the people. An old Taoist admired him and gave him a package of elixirs for immortality.
He gave them to Chang'e for safekeeping. Disciple Yi coveted the elixir of immortality. Chang E swallowed the elixir in a hurry and flew to the sky.
When Yi returned home, he was so distressed that he set up a banquet on August 15 every year to reunite with Chang'e against the moon.
传说嫦娥是易建联的妻子。她射了九个太阳以造福人民。一位老道士崇拜他，送给他一包长生不老药。他把它们交给嫦娥保管。弟子易渴望长生不老药。嫦娥匆匆吞下长生不老药，飞向天空。易建联回到家后，非常伤心，他在每年的8月15日举办了一次宴会，与嫦娥在月球上团聚。
英语翻译技巧：
第一、省略翻译法
这与最开始提到的增译法相反，就是要求你把不符合汉语，或者英语的表达的方式、思维的习惯或者语言的习惯的部分删去，以免使所翻译出的句子沉杂累赘。
第二、合并法
合并翻译法就是把多个短句子或者简单句合并到一起，形成一个复合句或者说复杂句，多出现在汉译英的题目里出现，比如最后会翻译成定语从句、状语从句、宾语从句等等。
这是因为汉语句子里面喜欢所谓的“形散神不散”，即句子结构松散，但其中的语意又是紧密相连的，所以为了表达出这种感觉，汉语多用简单句进行写作。而英语则不同，它比较强调形式，结构严谨，所以会多用复杂句、长句。因此，汉译英时还需要注意介词、连词、分词的使用。
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Chang E rushes the month to hand down, ancient times time had a year, the space appeared ten sun, straight roasted the earth to brave the smoke, the sea water to dry out, the common people shortly were unable to live again. This matter has alarmed the hero which a name is Hou Yi, he mounts the Kunlun Mountains summit, transports the full supernatural power, pulls open the god bow, gas shoots the next nine unnecessary sun. Hou Yi establishes the unparalleled marvelous ability, receives common people's respect and the love, many people of integrity come in admiration of somebody's fame 投师 the scholarship. Deceitful was cunning, plan loose Mongolia also did not mix. Soon, Hou Yi married a beautiful good wife, the name has been called Chang E. Hou Yi besides passes on technique the hunting, all day long with wife in same place, the people all envy this to a perfect match affectionate couples. One day, visits friends Hou Yi to Kunlun Mountain asks to say that, the chance encounter from this the process queen mother of the west, then obtains package of not dead medicines to the grandmother. It is said, under the clothing this medicine, can instantly ascend to heaven becomes an immortal. However, Hou Yi does not give up abandons the wife, has temporarily to give not the dead medicine Chang E to collect. Chang E enters medicine Tibet the dressing table in hundred valuable chest, but unexpectedly is seen by loose Mongolia. After three days, Hou Yi leads the numerous people to egress the hunting, has ulterior motives loose Mongolia disguised to fall ill, has remained down. After waits Hou Yi to lead the numerous people to walk soon, loose Mongolia grasps the treasured sword to intrude 内宅 the rear court, intimidates Chang E to hand over not the dead medicine. Chang E knew oneself is not the loose Mongolia's match, critical time she takes the bull by the horns, turns around to turn on hundred valuable chest, put out not dead medicine to swallow. Chang E swallows down the medicine, the body flutters immediately to the ground, runs out the window, flies to the space. Because Chang E is worrying the husband, then flies falls to leaves on the world recent moon to become an immortal. Evening, Hou Yi got the home, the maidservants to complain tearfully the matter which the daytime occurred. Hou Yi both startled and gets angry, pulls out the sword to kill the evil person, loose Mongolia early ran away. Was mad Hou Yi beats the breast and stamps the feet wah wah greatly shouts. Is deeply grieved Hou Yi, looks up to the nighttime sky summon to love wife's name. By now he surprisedly discovered that, today moon especially bright is bright, moreover has the form which rocks to resemble Chang E. Likes the Hou Yi hurried faction person in back garden which to Chang E, displays the incense table, puts honey food fresh fruit which she usually most likes eating, remote offers a sacrifice to in the moon is being attached to own Chang E. The blank space common people after learned by hearsay Chang E rushes the news which the month becomes an immortal, decorates the incense table in abundance under the month, propitiously implores to good Chang E to be safe. From this time on, the Midautumn Festival 拜月 custom spread in the folk. Chang E rushed the month story by the bright manner and the gorgeous color eulogy, has praised beautifully, compared with the ancient literature concerned Chang E's record, obviously the people rushed the month story to Chang E to do have very processed, decorate, cause the beautiful image and the month with are beautiful, cause it to conform to the people to the beautiful pursue. Spreads "Chang E with the modern age to rush really broadly the month" different, "On the Entire Classical Chinese literature" edited "Spirit Constitution" to record "Chang E melted the toad" the story: "Chang E, Yi Qiye, steals grandmother not dead medicine clothing it, rushes the month. Toward, will occupy to has yellow. Has yellow occupies it: Said: ' Lucky, handsome will turn over to the younger sister, alone will head west, meets the day 晦 awn, will not do be startled does not do fear, latter also greatly prosperous.' Chang E then holds the body to the month, is the toad." After Chang E turns the toad, is punished all day long in the moon pounds not the dead medicine, the lonely impoverished life, Li Shangyin once has been having the poem to sigh Chang E: "Chang E should the regret steal the efficacious medicine, 碧海青天 every night heart."
沈阳王小圈儿
Legend has it that Chang'e was Yi's wife. She shot nine suns to benefit the people. An old Taoist admired him and gave him a package of elixirs for immortality. He gave them to Chang'e for safekeeping. Disciple Yi coveted the elixir of immortality. Chang E swallowed the elixir in a hurry and flew to the sky. When Yi returned home, he was so distressed that he set up a banquet on August 15 every year to reunite with Chang'e against the moon.
小玩子2603
After Hou Yi shot, she got a magic pill that could break away from death in the place of the West Queen Mother.
后羿射日后，在西王母娘娘之处得到了能够脱离死亡的仙丹。
Pong Meng, a wicked man with a wrong mind, holds a sword to take away the elixir.
心术不正的恶徒蓬蒙持剑要夺走仙药。
Chang'e, in order to protect the people from being harmed by misfortune, took the elixir and rushed to the moon to ascend to the sky.
嫦娥为了保护老百姓不被逢蒙所害，吃了仙药，奔月升天到了月亮上。
在东汉之前，没有文件说指嫦娥与羿是夫妻关系，《归藏》对照卦象解释可能是夫妻。直到高诱注解《淮南子》才指明嫦娥是后羿之妻。
嫦娥，是中国神话中的月宫仙子。《山海经》中古天帝——帝俊的女儿、大羿之妻，其美貌非凡，本称恒娥（姮娥），因西汉时为避汉文帝刘恒的讳而改称娥，又作常娥。也有称其姓纯狐，名嫄娥。
神话中因服用大羿自西王母处所求得的不死药而奔月成仙，居住在月亮上面的广寒宫之中。在东汉之前，无资料明指嫦娥与羿是夫妻关系，《归藏》对照卦象解释可能为夫妻。
直到高诱注解《淮南子》才指明嫦娥是后羿之妻。在部分民间传说中，将嫦娥与道教神话的月神太阴星君合并，尊称为月宫黄华素曜元精圣后太阴元君，或称月宫太阴皇君孝道明王，作女像。
