英语句子批改

1. I'm glad to know your son John Smith will arrive to (改为 in) china! 到达某地应该用 arrive in (大城市或国家)，arrive at(小城镇或农村)2. Let me tell you something that different from USA. 句子不通，有两种改法： 1）改为 something + 形容词短语——Let me tell you something different in our city from that in yours. ( 所不同的不是美国与 something，因为国家和事情不能类比，改为指代 something 的 that in USA 就可比了) 2) 改为 tell sb. about sh.——Let me tell you something about the difference between our City in China and yours in USA.（用名词 difference） 以上两种改法都另外加上城市，用以直接点题。3. The first is （the）climate. （只这里的气候，是特指） 4. In this city, with snows sometimes, it is very cold in winter , and it rains rarely , but hardly had it rained, then it would very large. 句子较长，其后表述有些脱节，改动如下： In our city，north of the lower reaches of the Changjiang River(用江北作同位语，以说明下文冬天既下雪又下雨的特殊气候现象，不然下文有些唐突) , with snows sometimes, it is very cold in winter raining rarely（分词短语作陪衬状语）；however（比用 but 更为妥贴），did it rain, it would very be very heavy. 1) 注意不要混淆 hardly...when/before 和 no sooner ...than 中的关联词。不过这两种用法用在这里都不妥，应该改为条件虚拟语气，改动处还是用了倒装句。 2）大雨只能用 heavy，不能用 large。5）So you should have John （删去to） carry （the 改为 an）umbrella. 1） 使役动词动词 have, make 和 let 后用不定式作宾语补足语都不带 to。 2) the umbrella 双方心照不宣的雨伞， an umbrella 任意一把雨伞.6）The second is food, it is a lot of different from USA, so John should try to adapt to the Chinese food. 改动如下： The second is the food here. It is quite different from yours, so John should be ready to try to adapt himself to the Chinese food. 1) 还是要注意上面提到的可比性； 2）Tom 还没有到怎么去适应呢，所以添加 be ready to 建议有思想准备； 3）adapt 是使役动词，adapt sb. to sth. 使某人适应某事7）In addition, he must learn （to 多余） how to use chopsticks which is the tool to eat （in China）.8）Finally, please (添加 remmember to) carry a USA's map, (添加 for I'd like to know more about your country) .9) I hope we'll see each other as quickly ( 此处还是用 soon 为好) as possible

1、It's very clever of you to do so.

你这样做非常好。

2、It's nice of you to write this way.

很高兴你能这样写。

3、Wonderful!Your English is very good and your answers are correct.

太好了！你的英语很好，你的答案是正确的。

4、I'm sure you can do your work better next time.

我相信你下次能更好地做你的功课。

5、You've done a good job.

你做得挺不错。

6、You are doing wonderfully! You can do better now than you did before.

你做的完美！你可以现在比以往做得更好。

7、You have improved a lot.I am proud of you.

你有进步了。我为你骄傲。

8、That's great.Please never give up trying.Success comes through hard work and constant effort.好了。

请不要放弃尝试。成功是通过努力工作和不断的努力。

9、No pains,no gains.I hope you will make more progress in the future.

一分耕耘，一分收获。我希望你能在未来取得更大的进步。

10、What good work!You are the pride of our class. Work harder,and you will make more progress.

做得真好！你是我们班的骄傲。努力工作，你就会取得更多的进步。

稍微改点吧arrive in something that that去掉吧large 你是想说雨大吗 用heavy或者strong. So 没完呢 so前别打句点to carry 前to 去掉

对的，联合国作为一个组织，表示单数，have改为has。inflict sth on或upon sb把什么强加到某人身上，是及物动词，这里是把upon sb提前了。