gre英语作文

作文题只要理解意思就可以了，何必考虑句子成分这种东西？

那里存在现在证据那放松方式的居住在朝派小镇促进较好者健康和较大长寿与相比社交聚会兴奋活跃的走步的生活在朝派大量地cities生意在朝派小镇的leeville报告较少数几天的病假拿在附近个体workers与相比社交聚会生意在朝派在附近无拘束城市的梅森城市此外Leeville有仅有一医生为它一千居民但是在朝派梅森城市比例的医生向居民存在五次阿斯高度.Leeville居民的平均年龄是这些发现建议那个居住在寻找更长更和更有益健康生活的梅森City居民的在相当大的程度上更高与相比那将去考虑迁移到小社区.SO将去居住在ruturn居住在小镇吗?.you得到的至少120词的写一成分在4月10日以前更好些完成它

I like to watch fictional movies and novels, because I am always attracted by the unpredictable plots, which opens my vision. In the fiction movies, aliens come to the earth and try to destroy the world. Human being have to fight against the aliens with their wisdom. I can see the big world from these stories. It triggers my interest to explore the world. At the same time, I gain a lot of knowledge about the earth. I believe that aliens must exist in another galaxy. When the scientists make further research of the universe, someday, we can know more about the outer space. I have the great passion to explore the universe.

我喜欢看科幻电影和小说，因为我总是被里面不可预知的情节所吸引，开阔了视野。在科幻电影中，外星人来到地球并试图毁灭世界。人类必须用他们的智慧与外星人战斗。我可以从这些故事中看世界，它激发了我探索世界的兴趣。与此同时，我对地球有了许多了解。我相信外星人一定是存在于另一个星系中的，当科学家们对宇宙进行进一步的研究时，总有一天，我们可以更多地了解外太空。我对探索宇宙充满了热情。

I've made a lot of progress this semester. First of all, I have made great progress in Chinese. I can recite 10 texts, 100 ancient poems and 1000 words. Under the guidance of my teacher, I have learned to write diary, weekly record and composition. I also got 6 A + in my composition! I love reading very much. I have almost finished reading the books of my sister Wu Meizhen.

这学期我进步很大。首先，我在汉语方面取得了很大的进步。我能背诵10篇课文，100首古诗，1000字。在老师的指导下，我学会了写日记、周记和作文。我的作文还得了6个A+！我非常喜欢读书。我几乎读完了我妹妹吴美珍的书。

I have also made great progress in mathematics. I've become a master of mental arithmetic again this semester! I'm still the first in my class in mathematics now!

我在数学方面也取得了很大的进步。这学期我又成了心算大师了！我现在还是班上数学第一名！

一、写作步骤：

1. skim the question and write the introduction

2. input the topic sentence.找出问题所在，一个问题一句话

3. develop the body paragraphs one by one.逐一展开问题段落，按重要性递减的规律展开

4. conclusion（略）

5. checking

二、开头段的写作：

找出原论证的结论或主张，指出原论证的论据和假设，指出原论证的逻辑错误，GRE英语作文笔记(二)。

忠实的'保留原始信息。用自己的词保留原始信息。

In this argument / analysis, the arguer concludes / claims that...To support / justify the conclusion , the arguer points out / provides the evidence that...and that...In addition , the arguer reasons（推理）that...

This argument suffers from several critical fallacies / flaws.

三、SURVEY问题：

1. vague => misleading （majority, percent, base number, few, many）

2. question: what questions will ask in the survey? Loaded questions有误导性的问题

3. Who

4. Average平均数不适合于每个成员

5. Confusing causal relationship with correlation混淆因果关系与相关性

Every causal relationship implies a correlation, but the statistical correlation does not necessarily implies a causal relation.

6. When was the survey conducted?

7. Are respondents（授调查者）being forthright（直率，说真话）? Image men / essence men

闪光句型:

1. the arguer over simplifies the issue of...

2. the arguer unfairly assumes that...

3. the arguer fails takesintosaccount other factors that...

4. the procedure of the survey might be problematic.

With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years, ___has____________(引出现象). However, _______ has________________, as____________(提出问题). As a result, _____has ____________________(指出影响).

The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones. First , __________________(影响一). More importantly, ________________(影响二). Hence, I believe that we will see a ____________(提出展望)/ Nevertheless, I do not think we will see a ______(或反面展望)

There are numerous reasons why ____, and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. The first is that the more(比较级)_____, the more (比较级). In addition, we all agree that________________________(第二个原因)

延伸阅读：小作文万能模板

考研英语小作文占10分， 要求考生根据所给情景写出约100词（标点符号不计算在内）的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、报告等。

一、一般开头句型

I’m writing to… 开门见山的开头模式

I’m writing to inform you that… (通知类型)

I’m writing to seek your assistance in… (请求类型)

I’m writing in response to your advertisement in… (回应类型)

I’m writing to express my views on… (建议类型)

I’m writing to apply for the scholarship that your department offers to students from other countries. (申请类型)

I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding… (咨询类型)

I’m writing to express my disappointment/dissatisfaction about… (投诉类型)

二、感谢类句型

I’m most grateful to you for your…

I’m writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude for…

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks for…

I feel greatly indebted to you for…

I’m writing to tell you how greatly I appreciate all you have done for me…

But for your kind assistance, I would have…

I must thank you again for your generous help.

Please accept my deepest gratitude.

三、道歉类句型

I feel really sorry to you for…

I must apologize to you for…

I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for not being able to…

Please accept my sincere apology for…

I want you to know how badly I feel about…

四、一般结尾句型

Any favorable consideration of my application will be highly appreciated. (申请/求职)

We should be very pleased if you could honor us with your presence. (邀请函)

Best wishes for your greater success in your career. (祝愿)

Thank you for your patience and concern in reading this letter. I hope this does not cause you too much inconvenience. I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. (套话组合)

Among my family, what I like most is a kindly sister to me. When I was a child, mom and Dad were not at home, usually she took care of me, so I knew her very well.

My sister's face was drums and red, like the peach blossoms that had just opened. Under her pale eyebrows, there was a pair of stern eyes, and she stared at me dead every day for fear that I would not learn. And her clever mouth was nagging me all day. Her hobby is sleeping in bed like a pig. I remember once, she was in high school. She didn't know that she was going to get up early in the middle school. She is just like elementary school, who can't afford to be lazy in bed. As a result, you guess what, the teacher gave a hard training. After that, she did not dare to sleep. Ha ha ha ha...

Once, I had a fight with my deskmate. My cousin stealthily went to tell her sister. She would take the table stare said: why fight with others. I have things to say again, this untied the misunderstanding, I and table back together.

This is my sister, Chen Zhaoying.

1、用于句首提出问题或现象的句型

Nowadays,it is common to hear/see……

2、用于阐述不同的观点的常用句型

Although more and more people come to believe...,there are still others who insist that...

3、用于陈述 个人观点/想法 的常用句型

In my opinion of view,both sides are partly right in that.My opinion of view is that...

4、条理性的关联词

to start with,next,in addition,finally

5、表示原因的句型

The reasons for this are as follows,...

6、用于结尾的句型

Therefore,it is not difficult to draw/come to the conclusion that...

7、用于书信的常用句型

I am uriting to you with reference to

I would be grateful if you could/would...

I look forward to hearing from you

Dear Mike,

How is everyting going ?

Id like to show you two photos of our family. They were took in this spring. When our families went out to enjoy ourselves.

In spring, the weather is nice. Do you think so?

Look!The first one ,we went out on a picnic on the beach.My mother and father were taking care of my younger sister.I was watching the beautiful scene at the sea and drinking.The second one ,when we finished,it was rain heavily ,we came back in a hurry.we were going home with a piece of cloth in this picture.

We had a good time !Id like you enjoy them !

Yours,

Liming

the latest word on this continuing concern comes from the international agency for research on cancer (iarc), which has concluded that working regularly with hair dyes in hair salons and barbershops probably increases the risk of cancer and that long term employment in these establishments is "probably carcinogenic to humans."

however, the iarc, a world health organization panel, reported that there is not enough evidence to conclude that occasional personal use of hair coloring raises the risk of cancer.this new report, published in the april, , issue of lancet oncology, is the first scientific word on the subject since , when spanish researchers reported that their review of 79 studies from 11 countries yielded no strong evidence of a link between hair dye and cancer risk. the only connection the spanish team observed was the possibility of a slight increase in the risks of leukemia and multiple myeloma, but they concluded that the causal effect was too weak to be a major concern.earlier, researchers at yale university found that long-term use of dark hair dye by women who began coloring their hair before 1980 may increase the risk of non-hodgkins lymphoma. no such risk was seen among women who began dyeing their hair after 1980. here, the difference may be due to the elimination of coal-tar-derived ingredients used in the older products that are known carcinogens. the yale study was published in the jan. 15, , issue of the american journal of epidemiology.

in general, i discourage use of hair dyes containing artificial coloring agents, which to my mind are as suspect in cosmetic products as they are in food. hair dyes applied to the head are absorbed through the scalp, where theres a very rich blood supply that may carry them throughout the body. im sure that the new iarc report wont be the last word on this subject. ill keep you posted on developments.

Li Hua is a Young Pioneer. He is going to the park. Now he is waiting for a bus.Suddenly he finds a watch on the ground.

He asks some people, "Whose watch is it?" But the watch isn't theirs. So he gives the watch to a policeman.

Now Li Hua gets on the bus.He is sitting near the window.An old woman gets on the bus.She has no seat.So he stands up and says, "Here is a seat for you, Granny. Please sit here."

有数据显示,在小城镇生活比在忙乱的大城市好得多,更健康,更长寿. 像Leeville这样的小城镇请病假的要比附近大城市Mason少。而且，Leeville的一千个居民中只有一个医生，而Mason的医生和居民的比率是5倍之多。Leeville居民的寿命要比Mason居民长得多。这些发现都说明要想活得健康活得长寿的人应当考虑搬到小社区。所以，大家应当回到小城镇去吗？ 写一篇不少于120字的作文。在4月10日前完成。++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++下面是作文。Yes, people should return to live in small towns as long as they are able to commute to big cities and work there. Most people love the peaceful and simple life in small towns. One of the major reasons for them to leave is that they cannot find a job there. As described in Theodore Dreiser’s novel, Sister Carrie had to leave her small town to find a job in Chicago. When she encountered trouble in the big city, she planned to go back. But, she knew she could not find any jobs there, so she had to stay in the big city. That happened a hundred years ago. Ever since then, much has been changed in the way to commute, which has made it possible for people to get a job in big cities, while living in small towns around. Big cities like Shanghai and New York have built good infrastructures like subways, light rails and freeways. More people should live in small towns in the rural areas as many others are doing. In this way, the big cities themselves will have more space for business and all kinds of pollution will be reduced. Meanwhile, the cities will be able to offer more jobs since there is more business. Security is one more important reason for people to live in small towns. As we all know, the crime rates are much higher in big cities than those in small towns. If people live in a community where people know each other, criminals will be scared away. Therefore, people should return to live in small towns. It is not only for their health but also for their security and for the business in big cities.

An Unforgettable TestLast Sunday,I took the GRE. It was the longest test I had ever taken. I entered the examination room at eight o＇clock and did not come out until twelve. For the first hour I sat there waiting anxiously for the proctor to give out the paper. Then the exam officially began. I saw nothing but the test paper. How time flew. I did one section after another. The test was over without my knowing it.Earlier I had taken many teats, yet at no test did I feel time so limited as this one. Usually there is plenty of time for me to go over what I have written when I finish the test. I would sit there waiting restlessly for the test to be over.But this time, it took me over twenty minutes to have finished the two sections on math at a much slower speed than usual. God bless me. I wish I had been careful enough this time.At noon, someone came over to talk with me about the test, which put me in doubt of whether or not I had put the number of my test certificate right on the answer sheet. I was sure I fined in the number, but I did not remember whether or not I had circled the corresponding number under it.Howevet, maybe all of My efforts are not made in vain. It would be terrible if I got no grades after working so hard.翻译难忘的考试上星期天，我参加了GRE考试。这次考试是我考得最久的一次。8点钟进考场，一直到12点多才出来，刚开始1个小时，我急不可耐地坐等发卷子。正式开考后，只觉得时间飞逝。哗一下，一部分做完了；哗,又另一部分做完了，于不知不觉之间中考完了试。以前，从没有哪次考试像这次一样时间扣得如此的紧。通常，我都是较快做完，并用大量时间复查，坐在那儿等时间过去，等得很着急。这次考试，仅数学的两个部分，我就花了20多分钟，大大慢于平时练习的速度。老天保佑，但愿我这次够细心!今天中午，来了个人与我聊起考试的事情，结果使我怀疑起我是否把准考证号码正确地填在答题纸上.填肯定是填过的，可是我记不清是否划过圈了。真糟糕! 别辛苦了一场，连成绩都没有，那就惨了。