英语文章修改

这就是修改过后的作文了，自己对照原来的看吧，改了不少小东西，分段没来得及整理，自己看吧！一定要采纳我哦！Telling lies are used to have bad reputation. However, it is true that we live in a world whelies are given every dayTeachers beautify the performance of their studentsto encourage confidence.Doctors hide the truth of the illness to keep theirpatients optimistic.Lovers tell sweet words to keep intimate relationship.of the beautiful lies, I am deeply touched by the story in which apainter drew a leaf everyday outside his window to raise hope of a terminallyill patient. Sometimestelling lies help us to deal with tough things and get another opportunity tomake it better. Therefore, whether it is good to tell lies cannot be easilyconcluded by a definite answer. Instead, it should be judged by its motivation. As a highschool student, the instruction of our teacher and the anticipation of ourparents give me great pressure. When I did not perform quite well in the test, sometimes I told a lie to avoid letting them down. However, as I felt ashamedand uneasy about it, I would be stimulated to study harder, waiting for thenext opportunity to prove my ability. Followed bythe same standard, when I am cheated, I persuade myself to calm down and thinkabout the motivation of his lies. If it is forgivable, I chose to accept andgive him another chance. A well-knownstudy shows that an ordinary person tells three lies one day. So, I would rather enjoy itthan live as a hypocrite. Telling white lies in a necessary time and a well-meaningway, our living world is more diverse; our lives are more interesting, full of surpriseand possibilities.

留学生论文润色是论文写作中非常重要的一部分，前期的规划以及写作技巧是重要的，但是一篇高分的论文离不开不断的写作和润色修改，但是很多同学同时存在一个问题，自己写作后就形成了固定思维，无论是大的框架上还是小的细节上，都很难把握论文的润色修改。

论文的问题

1、逻辑思路混乱

一个很重大的原因是因为审题不清，没有找到通常所说的"题眼"，导致一步错，步步错，一路下来，整篇文章的逻辑与题目不匹配，导致接下来的写作没有准确地抓住中心，甚至完全写偏题。

2、框架结构

可以说框架结构没有对错之分，只有是否适合。有些框架结构只覆盖了问题的前半部分，忽视了后半部分，以至于没有完整回答essay的问题。

3、论述内容方面

很多学生普遍的一个问题就是观点缺乏evidence或者不能体现critical analysis。建议argument后面，要有references内容支撑，再在后面加上自己的analysis;另一个就是，遇到那种要二选一的论题，argument counterargument refutation这种写法可以集中体现学生的critical thinking ability。

4、语言

语句通顺，措辞准确又具备学术性，没有任何文法和句法错误，让老师赏心悦目，理所当然会给老师留下好的印象。

论文润色怎么做？

1、语法优化

其实语法优化在英文论文润色上面显示出重要性的比例是非常大的，其中涉及到词语的选择。好比说同样一句话，怎么说出较高的文学素养。

2、短语优化

其实如果你将短语优化放在语法优化里面也是可以的，但是将其特意拿出来说，作为一个单独的润色特点而言，也是可以的。在英文论文里面，增加必要性的幽默化的词语是非常重要的。

3、跳出自身局限

如果是一个专业性较强的人，如何利用好语法，跳出自身的局限，得到一个更好的表达方式，这个就需要运用到论文润色的小技巧。

4、赋予文章生动形象

对于论文而言，专业技术的阐述和表达是非常关键的。但是这个过程中，文章的整体表达方式是不是足够的形象生动，这个也是非常关键的。

Something I plan to do during the winter holiday. I want to read a book during the winter holiday because reading are very important to us. I usually do some readings in my spare time. For example, when I am free, I will read newspapers. I often read books before I go to bed, which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.

for example ,I read a book when I finish my homework.最后加一句I like reading books .this winter holiday I will read many books.

I want to read a book during the winter holiday because books are very important to us. I usually read 【改成enjoy】a book in my spare time. For example【可以改为for instance，同样的意思，明显这个词汇更高级】, when I have nothing to do, I will read【改为appreciate，有欣赏的意思】 it.{ I also read a book before I go to bed， which has turned out to be right because they can improve my reading and writing ability.}这整句话前面那句是在不咋的，和你后面所用的词汇完全不是一个档次的，话说你几年级，后面的词汇到高中（turn out to be adj.)才会教。所以我决定全部改掉。。As a result of it,I broaden my horizon.What's more,I gain various knowledge.At the same time,I improve my reading ability in a short time.

在立意思路基本没有问题的基础上，主要针对段落结构就行的修改调整。篇章结构是一篇文章的骨架，这个骨架是否合理坚固是决定文章能否立起来的重要因素。结构合理，层次清晰，详略得当，首尾呼应这些都是篇章结构构成的要件。篇章结构的修改，是在立意思路基本没有问题的基础上，主要针对段落结构就行的修改调整。段落的修改，要着重考虑下述几方面的问题:第一，段落的顺序安排是否合理，是否体现出清晰的脉络；段落的详略安排是否得当，能否突出中心；第三，段与段之间是否衔接紧密，过渡自然。若有突兀之处，可以增删哪些内容。