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《She Walks in Beauty》 —— by Byron ( UK / 1788—1824 )《曼 舞 轻 歌 伊 人 夜》—— 原 著 / 乔治 · 戈登 · 拜伦 ( 英国 / 1788—1824 ) —— 翻 译 / '解 '读 - 李世纯 - 中国 长春 - 2021. 1. 27

She walks ''in beauty, 'like the night 【'f ''b】啊——夜色蓝蓝,烁烁星际,她翩翩旖旎Of cloudless climes and starry skies,啊——斗转星移,星移斗转,她旖旎翩翩And all that’s best of dark and bright啊——看呐,欣欣郁郁,郁郁欣欣,她扑朔眉宇Meet in her aspect and her eyes,啊——看呐,缱绻缠绵,缠绵缱绻,她纤纤怡然Thus ''mellowed to that tender 'light【''j 'c】啊——难舍啊——上天,难得呀——人间Which heaven to gaudy 'day denies.【'g】悠悠邈邈,邈邈悠悠,逸逸清馨,清馨逸逸风景线

One ''shade 'the more, one ''ray 'the less,【'd ''i】纯纯情啊绵绵意Had half impair’d the nameless 'grace【'h】愈隐愈现,她芊芊云髻Which waves in every raven tress绵绵意啊纯纯情Or softly lightens o’er her face,她愈现愈隐,恬静温馨Where thoughts serenely sweet express,啊——无以言拟,无以言喻How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.心绪可人,可人心绪

And on that cheek, and o’er that brow奕奕啊——婀娜,她曼舞——轻歌So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,含情啊——脉脉,她晏然——自若The smiles that win, the tints that glow轻歌呀——曼舞,她温良——恭俭But 'tell of days in goodness spent, 【'e】曼舞啊——轻歌,她心若——芷萱A mind at peace with all below,啊——她轻歌贤惠仁爱,她曼舞平易谦和A heart whose love is innocent.啊——她焕然葳蕤荣芳,她生辉贞善淑德 ... ...

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a'. 首先,特别鸣谢: 本作主要参考文献 a 本作主要参考文献 b 本作主要参考文献 ca. 对“她”,诗人并非平面直观、寻常共性、容貌之赞语描述,而是立体微观、风韵气质(the grace)仪态举止、特性美感、心灵感触的回顾;小诗笔调灵动飘逸,既特写工笔,又素描写意,感同舞池伴侣,面面相视,即即离离,相拥相携,身迁影移,华尔兹一曲,畅快淋漓;语境中“她”,形神比肩古代宝钗妙玉林黛玉?近代张爱玲林徽因?上官云珠谢芳陶慧敏?山口百惠栗原小卷赵雅芝?确是常人“无可言拟”,纵拜伦亦“无可言喻”;同时,小诗寓意百代瞬间,咫尺千里,极富时代张力,令读者憧憬神往者非局限亮节惠女贤媛,而拓展心驰更多更多高风儿男,以至家庭、群体、组织、机构、团体、政体、抑或国度、社会,甚至全人类b. 此处词义:移就修辞(诗意性)描述:以 ... ... 方/形式,姿势/状态;非处在 ... ... 某环境/境遇/氛围/时空/境地/时间/空间c. 此处词义:显眼/惹眼/拉风/亮/卖/看/焦/热点,风口浪尖等公众普遍关注处d. 此处词义:(与限定冠词连用)越/俞 ... ... 越/俞 ... ...e. 此处词义:彰显/示意/披露/揭示/映射/凸显/反映/流露出某信息f. 可以理解为:其前省略了 which/that is (引出限定语,修饰 beauty)g. 此处词义:常日,终日,当今天/时下(所在句可白描直译为:仙境上天难舍,今日人间难得)h. 此处词义可以理解为:妩媚/隽永之风情/意蕴感;所在句可白描直译为:其难以名状的神/姿/装态,妆容,扮相彰显/暗示之意指/内涵者往复变换,交替不断,同时,弥彰而欲盖,欲盖又弥彰(越正向掩饰/消除/销毁,越负向掩饰/消除/销毁“ 负负为正 = 否定之否定 = 越 x 越 y 越 = z = 洋溢 ”)i. 此处词义可以理解为:该词名词属性词意中各动作概念(类动名词,如:遮蔽/掩饰 sth.,焕发/映射 sth.)j. 此处词义可以理解为:动作/配合娴熟/默契/得心应手k. 中外互译,归根结底,人文互译;一个单词、一个文字,无论中外,其真正含义、生命活力,不仅在专家学者的词典、时尚强大的百度,也不仅在词法、句法、语法,而更多体现在实地的、实践中的语言、语句、语境、篇章的字里行间;翻译要完美原意,需要同观原作视野,跻身原作境地;翻译要完美原意,更要完美传递;原意传递要完美,其载体修辞,修辞差异之切换,之对接,不可或缺l. 本作译文尚有无奈数笔,期待更多诗友、译友积极参与,相互学习,共同提高

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《When you are old》——《当你老了》 --- William Butler Yeats ——威廉·巴特勒·叶芝When you are old and grey and full of sleep, 当你老了,头发花白,睡意沉沉,And nodding by the fire,take down this book, 倦坐在炉边,取下这本书来,And slowly read,and dream of the soft look 慢慢读着,追梦当年的眼神Your eyes had once,and of their shadows deep; 你那柔美的神采与深幽的晕影。How many loved your moments of glad grace, 多少人爱过你昙花一现的身影,And loved your beauty with love false or true, 爱过你的美貌,以虚伪或真情,But one man loved the pilgrim Soul in you 惟独一人曾爱你那朝圣者的心,And loved the sorrows of your changing face; 爱你哀戚的脸上岁月的留痕。And bending down beside the glowing bars, 在炉罩边低眉弯腰,Murmur,a little sadly,how Love fled 忧戚沉思,喃喃而语,And paced upon the mountains overhead 爱情是怎样逝去,又怎样步上群山,And hid his face amid a crowd of stars. 怎样在繁星之间藏住了脸。《Had I not seen the Sun》 —— Emily DickinsonHad I not seen the SunI could have borne the shadeBut Light a newer WildernessMy Wilderness has made —汉语译文(一)《如果我不曾见过太阳》我本可以忍受黑暗如果我不曾见过太阳然而阳光已使我的荒凉成为更新的荒凉汉语译文(二)《如果我不曾见过太阳》假如我没有见过太阳我也许会忍受黑暗可如今,太阳把我的寂寞照耀得更加荒凉《A Forever Friend》 《永远的朋友 》"A friend walk in when the rest of the world walks out." "别人都走开的时候,朋友仍与你在一起。” Sometimes in life, 有时候在生活中, You find a special friend; 你会找到一个特别的朋友; Someone who changes your life just by being part of it. 他只是你生活中的一部分内容,却能改变你整个的生活。 Someone who makes you laugh until you can't stop; 他会把你逗得开怀大笑; Someone who makes you believe that there really is good in the world. 他会让你相信人间有真情。 Someone who convinces you that there really is an unlocked door just waiting for you to open it. 他会让你确信,真的有一扇不加锁的门,在等待着你去开启。 This is Forever Friendship. 这就是永远的友谊。 when you're down, 当你失意, and the world seems dark and empty, 当世界变得黯淡与空虚, Your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly seem bright and full. 你真正的朋友会让你振作起来,原本黯淡、空虚的世界顿时变得明亮和充实。 Your forever friend gets you through the hard times,the sad times,and the confused times. 你真正的朋友会与你一同度过困难、伤心和烦恼的时刻。 If you turn and walk away, 你转身走开时, Your forever friend follows, 真正的朋友会紧紧相随, If you lose you way, 你迷失方向时, Your forever friend guides you and cheers you on. 真正的朋友会引导你,鼓励你。 Your forever friend holds your hand and tells you that everything is going to be okay. 真正的朋友会握着你的手,告诉你一切都会好起来的。

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让我们心怀信仰 Let Us Have Faith

Security is mostly a superstition.

安全大抵虚幻,

It does not exist in nature,

世间无处寻觅。

nor do the children of men

芸芸众生,

as a whole experience it.

无人有此经历。

Avoiding danger is no safer

避险难计久长,

in the long run than outright exposure.

不如现身搏击。

Life is either a daring adventure, or nothing.

抑或险中求胜,抑或碌碌无为,人生非此即彼。

To keep our faces toward change and

让我们直面改变,

behave like free spirits

行如自由之灵,

in the presence of fate is strength undefeatable.

翱翔命运天际,是为不败之力。

Days of Yore

昔日时光

[USA]Joy Rainey King

[美国]乔伊. R.金

Back in days of yore,

回首昔日时光,

Life was simple, maybe a little of a bore.

生活简单,也许有一点厌倦。

Life was good back then,

那时的生活多么美好,

Way, way back when.

那是很久,很久以前。

Ladies has dresses adorned with lace,

淑女的衣裙镶着蕾丝花边,

And a smile of contentment on their face.

满足的笑容在她们的脸庞浮现。

They has gorgeous hair down to their waist,

她们的秀发垂至腰际,

And exuded poise and a gentle grace.

举止优雅,高贵自然。

They also has a certain charm,

被追求者的臂膀呵护时,

When escorted on their suitor’s arm.

她们的魅力无疑迷人光艳。

When day was almost through,

当白日将尽,

They would have a mint julep or two.

她们会喝一杯薄荷朱利酒,也许两杯。

In those days people talked to one another,

在那些日子里,人们相互交谈,

Instead of always texting each other,

而不是相互发短信,

Back when ladies were ladies,

从前女人是淑女,

And men were men,

男人是儿男,

Back in the days of way back when.

从前的时光,那是很久以前。

生当如夏花 It Is Not Growing like a Tree

It is not growing like a tree

要成就人生,

In bulk doth make man better be;

不必如巨树,木秀于林;

Or standing long an oak, three hundred year,

不必如橡树,经年不倒,

To fall a log at last, dry, bald, and sere:

亦难逃枯朽之命;

A lily of a day

五月之百合,

Is fairer far in may,

绽放一日,便有万种风情;

Although it fall and die that night—

纵然是夜凋零,

It was the plant and flower of light.

却是光华的落英;

In small proportions we just beauties see;

于细微处领略美丽,

And in short measures life may perfect be.

于残缺处完满生命。

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