信息革命英文

ComputerComputer, can be said to be the advantages and disadvantages of each.Lee:Can make everybody knowledge augmented, convenient and quick. Can be in the Internet that the rich knowledge, also can be in line with the various aspects of the master to communicate.Fraud:However, if we were using a computer, the bad. Because many children have no self-control, think that the Internet is used to play. On the network game addiction, buy the game card to change the game coin, with the game currency to buy the computer making clothes.Therefore, we have to remain vigilant of computer. Because everything is not perfect.电脑电脑，可以说是利弊相存。利：可以使大家的知识面增广，方便快捷。可以在网上得知丰富的知识，也能在网上与各个方面的大师进行交流。弊：但是，如果人们反被电脑利用，这就坏了。因为很多小朋友没有自制能力，认为网络是用来玩的。就对网络游戏上了瘾，买那些游戏卡去换游戏币，用游戏币去买那些所谓的用电脑制作的图片衣服。所以说，大家也要对电脑保持警惕性。因为所有东西都不是完美的。

be to do sth.的意思是“是为了……”，表一种行为或事物的目的此句话的意思应该是：这个根本的方法是为了帮助他们完全进入到信息革命。纠错：此句中修饰method的“根本的”应用形容词fundamental，而该副词的拼写应为fundamentally。involved也拼错了。 is to assist them和is to have them应该是重复的，具体改法根据句子意思来