英语改错100种

1)she told my sister that she was wrong (confusing, who was wrong? She? Or my sister?) 改成：she admitted to my sister .....（自己承认）。或 she pointed out to my sister....（指出）2）Li Bai was one of the greatest poets3) looking up the sky, I saw a bird was flying round the tree.4) his brother wants to study either American literature or English literature.5) Tom is one of the students who refuses to accept the invitation to the party.6) she was knocked down by the bike but she was not seriously hurt7) Upon entering the room, no one was seen there.8) Over the past few years, there were nearly 1000 houses builted in the city.10） the machine was packed in a box, the typist could not find it. 原本意思是 the typist is packed in box，那不是原意吧！9）he lost the purse, and found it shortly, the police helped him. Soon 改成shortly比较恰当

4、肯定句中表达“两者……都”用“both……and”，只有否定句中才用“either……or”。5、表达“……之一”，用“one of……”。8、有表示过去的时间状语Over the past few years，再根据句意，句子的时态应该用过去完成时。

It took Jack two hours to climb the mountain.The tomatoes I picked are redder than yours.they didin't had chance to be there two montbs ago.Although he is old.my grandpa works on the farmYou are terribly ill. You'd better stay in bedThe nearest village is about one hundred miles awayI don't like going out lonely in darkI'm looking forward to getting her letterBirds flew back because of the fine environmentThe students entered the classroom one by one

1、a改成an。2、and后面的I去了。3、fastly改为fast。

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1.She told my sister that she was wrong. （对）2.Li Bai was one of the greatest poets.（对）3.Looking up at the sky ,a bird was flying round the tree. （其中一种改法：Looking up at the sky , I saw a bird flying round the tree. 注：looking up 的动作发出者应该是人，且要与主句的主语相一致。）4.His brother wants either to study American literature or study English literature.（应该成：His brother wants to study either American literature or English literature.）5.Tom is one the students who refuses to accept the invitation to the party.（refuses应该去掉s。one of the+复数名词+从句。注：从句的谓语动词应与前面结构中的复数名词保持一致。）6.She was knocked down by a bike,but it was not serious. （去掉but后面的it，这里应该是she，但可以省略。）7.On entering the room,no one was seen.（其中一种改法：When she entered...）8.Over the past few years,the city has nearly built 1000 houses.（其中一种改法：Over the past few years, nearly 1000 houses have been built in the city.)9.He lost a purse and soon found it.The police helped him. （对，要是中国考试也许会认定这个题太罗嗦云云，其实老外在文章中也有如此行文的。）10.Packed in a box,the typist could not find the machine. （其中一种改法：They packed it in...）仅供参考，如有纰漏，请高手指教，谢谢。

1.She told my sister that she is wrong. (这样的情况下，一般用is，was显得比较别扭)2.Li Bai was one of the greatest poets.3.Looking up at the sky, a bird is flying round the tree.4.His brother wants either to study American literature or study English literature.5.Tom is one the students who refuses to accept the invitation to the party.6.She was knocked down by a bike, but it was not serious.7.Upon entering the room, no one was seen. (使用On不通顺，是病语)8.Over the past few years, the city has nearly built 1000 houses.9.He lost his purse and soon found it. The police helped him. (his比a更贴切)10.Packed in a box, the typist could not find the machine.我帮你看了一下语法，没有太多错误

1.问题较多！主要体现在两点：1）和原文句意不符。原文把作业负担过重和睡眠不足、缺乏锻炼并列为问题原因，而楼主写成了“作业负担过重导致了睡眠不足和缺乏锻炼”。2）Thisphenomenon前面是句号，说明前面是一个完整的句子，但是你写成了一个介词短语（做原因状语）加一个非限制性定语从句的结构，主句连主语和谓语都没有。其他还有点语法和搭配等小问题。建议改成：Nowadaysmanystudentssufferfromhealthproblemssuchasobesityandshort-sightedness,whichmostlyresultfromtoomuchhomework,lackofenoughsleepandproperexercise.Thisphenomenonhasraisedincreasingconcerninsociety.如果用楼主的结构，则payattentionto中的to，在被动句中也不能省略。2.改写成：Forthesakeoflesseningthestudents'pressure,...楼主要注意：这也是一个介宾短语（做目的状语），不是单个句子。是students'，不是student's。3.主句问题不大，if从句中的isturnedintoreality不妥帖。turnintoreality意思是“变成现实；实现”，和句意有所差别。建议改成：Iftheadviceaboveisputintopractice,...put...intopractice是一个固定短语，意思是“把...付诸实践；加以实施”。