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1.Deng Yaping Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player of table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the ll th Asian Games and the 41st World Tabte Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic Games she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure? Her hard work and determination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis underthe guidance of her tather. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything. 译文: 邓亚萍 邓亚萍,女,28岁,河南人,一位杰出的乒乓球运动员。她分别在11后亚运会和41届世界乒乓球锦标赛上获得冠军,并在25后奥运全中获得两枚金牌。为什么她能在个子不高的状况下取得如此辉煌的成就呢?是她的勤奋和决心弥补了她的缺陷,指引她走向成功。4岁时,她在父亲的指导下开始打乒乓球;8岁时就夺得业余体校全国冠军;1998年,成为国家集训队员。在成功的路上,她向我们证明了:个子矮小并不重要,勤奋才是成功的关键。 2. 作文原题: 最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。 60%的同学认为: 1. 不应收门票 2. 公园是公众休闲的地方 3. 如收票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象。 40%的同学认为: 1. 应收门票,但票价不宜高 2. 支付园林工人工资 3. 购新花木 满分作文列表: 高考满分作文1(1号题) Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 3. The Olympic Games The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world. Athletes from different countries compete in a variety of sports which are divided into winter and sum mer games. The Olympics began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago. The first recorded Olympic competition was held in 776 B. C. It was held in an outdoor stadium and about forty thousand people watched the event. The first thirteen Olympics consisted of only one race running. The games had been held regularly for about 1 200 years. Then, in the year 397 the Olympics were prohibited by the Roman Emporor. It was not until 1896 that the first Olympics of modern times were held in Athens. From then on the games are held every four years rugularly. The Olympics have become the world's most important athletic events and a symbol of sporting friendship of all the people of the world. [参考译文] 奥运会 奥运会每隔四年在世界上一个不同的城市举办一次。来自不同国家的运动员在各类运动项目中角逐。这些运动项目又分为冬季项目和夏季项目。 奥运会起源于2 700多年前的希腊。第一次有记载的奥运会竞赛举办于公元前776年。比赛是在露天体育场进行的,大约有4万人观看了比赛。前天十三届的奥运会只有一个项目:赛跑。奥运会一直定期举办了约1 200年,然后,公元397年,被罗马皇帝禁止举办。 直到1896年,第一届现代奥运会在雅典举行。从那时起,奥运会定期每四年举行一次。奥运会已成为世界上最重要的运动赛事,也是全世界人民在运动中体现友谊的象征。 4. The Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress. The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it. Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not. Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English. 5.Saving Our Earth It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health. So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution caused by rubbish. But that's not enough. We must all try our. best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to. save our city and our living place. 回答者: canspringbefar - 经理 五级 1-2 14:52第四部分:书面表达(共两节,35分) 第一节 情景作文(20分) 一、 内容要点: 1. 讨论 2. 爬山 3. 捡拾别人(或收拾自己)的垃圾 4. 投放垃圾 二、 说明:内容要点可用不同方式表达。 三、 One possible version: Last Thursday,we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing.We came up with several choeces such as going boating,climbing a mountain,and going to an amusement park.Finally,we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day,we set off early in the moring .While climbing the mountain.we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.However.when we reached the top,we were shocked to see litter here and there,such as bottles and banana peels.Then we started to pick up the litter.Afterwards,we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively. We were tired but happy. 第二节 开放作文(15分) One possible version: From the picture I can see a pair of proud compasses and a hard-working pencil.The compasses are big,drawing a circle with ease,while the pencil is small,drawing a line with great effort.I think the compasses are reasonable to be proud because no one else can do the job better.At the same time,however,he should realize the pencil has his own advantages.The pencil can do other shapes better than the compasses,even pictures.So in my opinion,while we are confident in ourselves,we should recognize strengths in other and show due respect for them.

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Greeting card

Thanks to the Internet,more and more people like to send electronic cards instead of paper ones at New York’s.Electronic cards are more interesting and lively than the traditional ones.For you can get not only pictures but also sound and even animations.Besides,they are faster to send and receive.There are many websites online where you can choose your favorite cards.More importantly,since electronic cards have become popular less paper is used for making paper cards.This is especially good for the environment.

多亏了互联网,越来越多的人喜欢把电子纸卡,在纽约的电子卡是比传统的更有趣和生动。你不仅可以得到图片而且声音甚至动画。另外,他们更快的发送和接收。有许多在线网站,你可以选择自己喜欢的`卡。更重要的是,由于电子贺卡已经成为流行的文件是用来造纸的卡。这是环境的特别好。

The advantages and disadvantages of the Internet

The internet plays a very important role in our dayflies. Everyday thousands people surf the net. With the help of the net you can get many useful information, you can make friends with different people who are known or unknown, you can ask for help or question the answer.

互联网在我们的蜉蝣中起着非常重要的作用。每天有数千人在网上冲浪。在网上你可以得到很多有用的信息,你可以和不同的人做朋友,他们是已知或未知的,你可以要求帮助或问题的答案。

Every coin has two sides; there is so much rubbish on the net, which are some medium messages about crime or sex. Moreover the cost is large, which also make people waste time on it.

每一个硬币都有两面,网上有这么多垃圾,这是一些关于犯罪或性的媒体信息。而且成本很大,这也使得人们在这方面浪费时间。

Its abilities should used by people. We should correctly take the advantage of the net, make our life more beautiful.

它的能力应该被人们使用。我们应该正确地利用网络的优势,使我们的生活更美好。

The imagination of the computer in the future

Computers are becoming more and more important in our daily life. Do you know the history and the changes of computers? Computer was invented in 1946. At that time, The machine was huge and it was as large as a big house. It weighed about 30 tons. Computer is a very useful tool in our life, in our study as well as works. For example, computer can send some messages to foreign friends by E-mail. The computer can open our eyes to let us know more. Computer is the most helpful invention in the world. Computer can help us in study or work. There are many computer functions(功能)We can listen to music or play the game on computer. It makes us relax. Its hard to imagine what our life would be like if we had no computers in our daily life. And in my opinion, computers are going to change our life completely in the near future.

电脑在我们的日常生活中变得越来越重要了。你知道计算机的历史和变化吗?电脑是在1946发明的。当时,机器是巨大的,它像一个大房子一样大。它重达30吨。电脑是我们生活中非常有用的工具,在我们的学习中以及作品中。例如,计算机可以通过电子邮件发送一些消息给外国朋友。电脑可以打开我们的眼睛,让我们知道更多。电脑是世界上最有帮助的发明。计算机能帮助我们学习或工作。有许多计算机的功能(功能)我们可以听音乐或玩电脑游戏。它使我们放松。很难想象我们的生活会是什么样的,如果我们在日常生活中没有电脑。在我看来,电脑将完全改变我们的生活在不久的将来。

Internet advantages and disadvantages

Today many students are interested in going online. But it has advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are: getting a lot of information quickly, a useful learning tool and making friends. The disadvantages are: playing games and chatting can waste time and money, it isn’t good for our study. You can be cheat when you go online. I think going online is good for me. I plan to go online for an hour everyday. If you make a plan, you can find it is very useful. We use it to open to expand the field of vision, the study knowledge, but must certainly grasp the discretion.

今天,许多学生都对在线去感兴趣。但它有优点和缺点。其优点是:快速获取大量信息,是一种有用的学习工具和交友。缺点是:玩游戏和聊天可以浪费时间和金钱,这对我们的学习不好。当你去网上的时候,你可以欺骗你。我想上网对我有好处。我计划每天上网一个小时。如果你制定计划,你会发现它是非常有用的。我们用它来拓展视野,学习知识,但一定要把握好自由裁量权。

1. 你还要别的什么吗?

误:Else what would you like?

正:What else would you like?

析:else修饰疑问词或不定代词时,应放在它们的后面,又如:Do you want anything else?

2. 请你不要打开窗户,好吗?

误:Would you not please open the window?

正:Would you please not open the window?

析:Would you please ……用于委婉地提出建议、请求等。其否定形式应为:Would you please not ……

3. 昨天所有的学生都去了公园。

误:The all students went to the park yesterday.正:All the students went to the park yesterday.析:当all, both等作定语修饰名词,且名词又有the修饰时,all, both等通常放在之前。

4. 她捡起了笔,把它还给了我。

误:She picked up the pen and gave back it to me.正:She picked up the pen and gave it back to me.析:由及物动词加副词构成的短语,当宾语是代词时,代词一般放在副词之前。

5. 你知道他什么时候回来吗?

误:Do you know when will he come back?

正:Do you know when he will come back?

析:在含有宾语从句的复合句中,宾语从句连接词之后应该用陈述语序。

6. 他会玩电脑,我也会。

误:He can use a computer. So I can.正:He can use a computer. So can I.析:以so或neither (nor)开头的句子,若前一句的情况适合另一个人或事物时,句子要倒装。肯定句时用so,否定句时用neighter或nor开头,助动词要与谓语动词保持一致。

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1.Deng Yaping Deng Yaping, 28, from Henan Province, is a talented woman player of table tennis. She was the table tennis champion of the ll th Asian Games and the 41st World Tabte Tennis Championship. And in the 25th Olympic Games she won two gold medals. Why can she make such brilliant achievements with the disadvantage of her short figure? Her hard work and determination to succeed helped her to overcome many disadvantages. At the age of 4, she began to play table tennis underthe guidance of her tather. When she was 8, she won the championship in the national competition of the amateur sports school. In 1988 she became a member of the National Training Team. On her way to success, she proved that height was nothing and hard work was everything. 译文:邓亚萍 邓亚萍,女,28岁,河南人,一位杰出的乒乓球运动员。她分别在11后亚运会和41届世界乒乓球锦标赛上获得冠军,并在25后奥运全中获得两枚金牌。为什么她能在个子不高的状况下取得如此辉煌的成就呢?是她的勤奋和决心弥补了她的缺陷,指引她走向成功。4岁时,她在父亲的指导下开始打乒乓球;8岁时就夺得业余体校全国冠军;1998年,成为国家集训队员。在成功的路上,她向我们证明了:个子矮小并不重要,勤奋才是成功的关键。 2. 作文原题:最近,你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是:公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息,给报社写一封信,客观地介绍讨论情况。 60%的同学认为: 1. 不应收门票 2. 公园是公众休闲的地方 3. 如收票,需建大门、围墙,会影响城市形象。40%的同学认为: 1. 应收门票,但票价不宜高 2. 支付园林工人工资 3. 购新花木满分作文列表:高考满分作文1(1号题)Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua3. The Olympic Games The Olympic Games are held every four years in a different city in the world. Athletes from different countries compete in a variety of sports which are divided into winter and sum mer games. The Olympics began in Greece more than 2 700 years ago. The first recorded Olympic competition was held in 776 B. C. It was held in an outdoor stadium and about forty thousand people watched the event. The first thirteen Olympics consisted of only one race running. The games had been held regularly for about 1 200 years. Then, in the year 397 the Olympics were prohibited by the Roman Emporor. It was not until 1896 that the first Olympics of modern times were held in Athens. From then on the games are held every four years rugularly. The Olympics have become the world's most important athletic events and a symbol of sporting friendship of all the people of the world.www.cooyu.net [参考译文]奥运会 奥运会每隔四年在世界上一个不同的城市举办一次。来自不同国家的运动员在各类运动项目中角逐。这些运动项目又分为冬季项目和夏季项目。 奥运会起源于2 700多年前的希腊。第一次有记载的奥运会竞赛举办于公元前776年。比赛是在露天体育场进行的,大约有4万人观看了比赛。前天十三届的奥运会只有一个项目:赛跑。奥运会一直定期举办了约1 200年,然后,公元397年,被罗马皇帝禁止举办。 直到1896年,第一届现代奥运会在雅典举行。从那时起,奥运会定期每四年举行一次。奥运会已成为世界上最重要的运动赛事,也是全世界人民在运动中体现友谊的象征。4. The Positive and Negative Aspects of Sports To a Chinese, the task of learning English well is not easy. So I, like many other English learners, have met with difficulties in learning English during the past seven years. But I managed to overcome them and made much progress. The spelling and meaning of words can be said to be the first difficulty I met as a beginner. But I found our my own way to deal with them. As to spelling, I never copied a new work again and again to remember it, but tried to find its relevance to the sound. In fact, as long as I can read the word out, I can write it out. As to the meaning, I rarely recite its Chinese translation but often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning. Moreover, if you use a word quite often, its spelling and meaning will be no problem. After all, we are learning English in order to use it. Grammar and idioms may be another difficulty. But I have also got over it. I have not read lots of grammar books. But I spent much time reading the articles written by native speakers or specialists in English. By doing so, I came to gain “a sense of English language”. I began to gain a feel for which sentences are “good English” and which are not. Finally, I want to say that overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance. In the past seven years I spent at least an hour on English each day. I believe this is an important reason why I am able to make progress in learning English.5.Saving Our Earth It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health. So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already made laws against pollution caused by rubbish. But that's not enough. We must all try our. best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment so as to. save our city and our living place.

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英语书面表达在英语考试中并不难,但要拿高分并不容易。下面是我整理的内容,供大家参考。

写作要求:学校英语社团在举办征文比赛,请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇题为“The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most”的英语文章。内容要点如下:

1.对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈,她四十几岁;

2.她总是耐心倾听我的问题,并建议我如何解决它们;

3.作为一名医生,她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班,把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作;

4.所以,我认为她不仅是位好妈妈,也是名好医生。

5.我希望……

要求:1.内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;2.词数90个左右;3.第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2-3句话补充完整。

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The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most

My mother is the person who has influenced me most.

She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she can’t be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.

I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. She’d better have more time to relax herself.

(1)The Hero in My Heart

As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.

Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938, he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.

I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.

(2)Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies.She often helps her parents with the housework. It’s her birthday this Saturday;many classmates will go to her home for her birthday party. Some of them willask their parents for some money to buy her gifts. But I don’t think it’s agood idea, because that’ll cost her parents’ money. I’m going to make abirthday card for her by myself. I’m sure she’ll like it.

(3)How to be a good learner?

As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.

We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.

I think all these above will be helpful to us.

Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.

She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.

I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.

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英语作文是高考英语中的必考题型,它可以考查高中学生英语的综合运用能力,代表了学生的英语书面表达能力。下面,是我为你整理的高中优秀英语作文150字及翻译,希望对你有帮助!

It has been reported that many stores in the supermarket had been shut down. It is known to all that as the development of e-commerce, people like to buy things online, which makes the shops have less customers. The challenge that e-commerce brings requires the traditional business to make some changes.

据报道,许多在超市的商店被关闭。众所周知,随着电子商务的发展,人们喜欢在网上买东西,这使得商店客户变少。电子商务带来的挑战需要传统业务做出一些改变。

There are many reasons for the shops to go bankrupted. On the one hand, the rent is high. The shops in the supermarket need to pay a lot of money in order to rent the good place. We can see that every year, the price of land is increasing, so as the rent. On the other hand, most people go to the clothes shop to try on the clothes and buy the same style online. Because the price will be much cheaper online.

商店破产的原因有很多。一方面,房租很高。在超市的商店需要支付很多钱,为了租个好地方。我们可以看到,每一年,土地价格增加,租金也一样。另一方面,大多数人去服装店试穿衣服,然后在网上购买相同的样式。因为网上价格会便宜很多。

The traditional shops face the challenge, they need to make some adjustments, or they will be replaced by e-commerce completely. The customers are in the first place, if the shops have some features that attract them, they are willing to pay the bill. So don’t complain about the Internet, making change is the way out.

传统的商店面临挑战,它们需要做一些调整,否则会完全被电子商务所取代。顾客们是上帝,如果商店有一些特性,吸引着他们,他们愿意支付账单。所以不要抱怨互联网,改变才是出路。

People always play the joke that love is nothing to do with the age, weight and height. But it is normal for an older man to fall in love with the a young girl, while it is criticized for an older woman to fall in love with a young boy. As far as I am concerned, love is equal in front of two people who love each other.

人们总是开玩笑说,爱是与年龄、体重和身高无关。一个年长的男人爱上了一个年轻的女孩在人们眼中是正常的,但是一个年长的女人爱上了一个年轻的男孩却会遭到人们的批判。在我看来,爱在两个相爱的人面前是平等的。

In people’s eyes, they will applause for the older man who marries a young girl, because they think the man is such capable. They accept the idea that love is nothing to do with the age. When the situation comes to women, people will look down upon their relationship and speak ill of it. It seems that love has something to do with age.

在众人眼中,他们会把掌声送给一个年长的男人娶了一个年轻的女孩,因为他们认为他是有能力的人。他们接受爱情与年龄无关这个说法。但是当主角换成是女性的时候,人们会看不起这段关系,并且恶言相向。这样看起来,爱情与年龄有关。

There are so many couples show the good example of women can married a person who is younger than them and they live happily. On the contrary, the young couples get the high divorce rate, but the media only cover the former situation, which brings pressure to the women.

有很多夫妻树立了女人可以嫁给比自己年轻的而且还能幸福地生活的榜样。相反,年轻夫妇有着高离婚率,但是媒体只报道前面的情况,给女性带来了不少压力。

There is no doubt that true love happens when a couple loves each other with their hearts, age is not the problem.

毫无疑问,真正的爱情发生在全心全意相爱的情侣间,而年龄并不是问题。

Recently, I saw the impressive words, it said that some people just died when they were 25, while they only to be buried after 70. It is true for many people, they do the same things every day, when they are old and look back on their passed days, nothing is left. What a sad story, living with a soul is the life we should live.

最近,我看到了令人印象深刻的话语,说有些人25岁时就死掉了,而只是在70对以后才下葬。确实对很多人来说,他们每天都做同样的事情,当他们老了,回首过去,什么也没留下。这是一个多么悲伤的故事啊,有灵魂地活着是我们应该过的生活。

For a lot of students, they are looking forward to the first job, because they finally become independent and make living by their own. They are going to probe the world and they believe that there must be a lot of surprises waiting for them. While after woking for a few years, most students have been distressed by all kinds of difficulties, they give into the boring life.

对很多学生而言,他们期待着第一份工作,因为他们终于变得独立,靠自己生活。他们即将探索这个世界,相信一定有很多惊喜等着他们。但是工作几年后,大多数学生已经被各种各样的困难打击,陷入困境的他们屈服于枯燥的生活。

Living without a soul is like a walking dead, we are just wasting the time and repeating the same day until we die. It takes great courage to change the situation, for we are afraid of losing everything. We are born to own nothing and nothing to lose, just live the life we want.

没有灵魂的生活就像一个行尸走肉,我们只是在浪费时间,重复相同的一天,直到我们死去。改变现状需要很大的勇气,因为我们害怕失去一切。我们生来就一无所有,过我们想要的生活就好。

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