sherryaigigi
this story is about a panda, called paul. he was fat and made a living on making noodle in his family. but he was willing to become a kungfu master. when master turtle chose his student, he arrived with a firecracker. master turtle believed he was the one, although he knew nothing about kungfu. his job was to protect the valley of peace by defeating evil dragon. he loved eating. so master figured out the way of teaching him kungfu that attracted him with food. later he defeated the evil dragon with his own talent.
王小若1127
"When we eating mooncakes, listening a romantic music, appreciating the moon in the starry sky. "除去这句之外，没什么语法上的错误。不过小毛病一堆 Middle autumn day -Mid-Autumn day every family members -famaliesAn that night-On that nightwas the biggest one -was biggestMy parent -My parents/My father/My mother She played a piece of music in front of piano for us-she played the piano for usI will never forget that enjoyable night in my memory -I will never forget that enjoyable night in my life
