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本文严格按照如下四个基本要求操作:1. 结构合理三段式。1) 应试作文不可以只写两段,一定要达到三段,有时候根据需要4段或最多5段也可以,不过作为四级考试不推荐写作过长。只要满足三个段落,而且这三个段落的长度也要分布均衡合理,首位段落可以短一点,但是中间段落的长度一定要有足够保证,否则会出现头重脚轻的局面,给老师的印象非常不好。2) 段落之间的足够间距要保证,可以采用齐头式(每段顶格,段与段之间空一行的方式)2. 中心突出主题句文章的切题体现在提纲上,最好的办法就是将提纲的中文提示改写成主题句放在段落首位。这一点至关重要。3. 层次清晰导航词。由于阅卷时间极其有限,要保证文章的层次感能在第一时间内到达老师的眼中,导航词,也就是层次过渡语决不可少。这种词汇就是老师的航标灯,在最短时间里可以给老师一个清楚的层次感。A Poster RecruitingNow people in growing numbers realize that it is important for college students to take an active part in social activities. Therefore, the student union of our university decides to organize a social practice during the summer holiday and is now recruiting volunteers from all the students. The details of the activity are listed as follows. First of all, the activity is designated to broaden the students’ view so as to enrich their knowledge. Next, the arrangement mainly includes looking after the senior citizens who live alone, introducing the effective ways of environmental protection to the passers-by in the street and cooperating in a survey for some companies. Last but not least, the timetable, namely schedule, will be settled down by next Monday.It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the information beyond books. As long as you are an undergraduate student of this university and are willing to take the responsibility to help others, welcome to contact us at 12345678 or send email to joy@hotmail.com. Please act without delay!
fabregas89
1、北京奥运 The Beijing 2008 Summer Olympics logo has a single Chinese character on a traditional red Chinese seal. The English words "Beijing 2008" are written with a Chinese brush below it. At the bottom of the picture, there are the five rings of Olympic Games. The figure in the logo resembles a runner or dancer and the Chinese character "jing" which means "capital". The image carries the message that today's China is not only a nation with a long and glorious history, but also one full of modern dynamics. First and foremost, this logo is a journey to the future, the emblem for China moving towards the 2008 Olympic Games. What is more, it is a symbol of the city's promise to make the Games a success. Accordingly, this emblem represents the heart of an ancient culture embracing the modern world, the spirit of a people moving towards a new destiny. In my view, first of all, the Olympic Game represents the spirit of sports. Arms flung wide, it invites all people and the world to share in the city's history, beauty, energy, and its future. In addition, it is a gesture of friendship and hope that the community of nations will unite in peace through sports. 参考译文 北京2008年夏季奥运会会徽在传统的红色中国印章上刻着一枚汉字。汉字下方用中国毛笔书写了“北京2008”的英文字样。图画底部是奥运的五环标志。会徽中的人物象征了一位跑步者或舞蹈者,而汉字“京”的意思是“首都”。 这一会徽表达了当今的中国不仅个拥有悠久灿烂的历史国度,更是一个充满了现代活力的国家。首先,这一会徽是一次奔向未来之旅,是中国迈向2008年奥运会的象征。其次,它是北京承诺将成功举办奥运的标志。因此,这一会徽代表了一种悠久文化拥抱现代世界的信心,以及中国人民迈向新征程的精神。 在我看来,奥林匹克运动会首先代表了体育的精神。它伸展了双臂邀请全世界及其人民分享北京的历史、魅力、能量及未来。此外,它是友谊的象征,以及希望国际社会通过体育运动进而和平共处。2、留学 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Studying Abroad. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below: 1)目前很多中国学生出国留学, 2)出国留学的好处, 3)我的看法。 Nowadays, going abroad for studies is enjoying a striking popularity among adolescents. Importance should be attached to studying abroad. There are a great many advantages of studying overseas. First and foremost, living and studying abroad offers students a different perspective of the world. On a university campus, international students are likely to encounter their counterparts from various countries and areas and are exposed to diverse ideas and values. What is more, overseas experience is the best opportunity for the real-life use of foreign languages. There is no better opportunity to improve second-language skills than living in the country in which it is spoken. Generally peaking, it is my view that although going abroad is expensive and perhaps painful, the payoff is worthwhile. In the first place, in addition to knowledge, overseas students can gain precious experiences that those who stay at home will never have. Furthermore, overseas experience, frustrating and painful as it may be, is conducive to the growth of adolescents.3、网络 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Internet. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 1、 互联网使用的现状, 2、 大学生是否应该使用互联网,人们的看法不同, 3、 我的看法。 In recent years, people are developing an inseparable relationship with Internet. As is known to all, it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line, either to entertain ourselves or to meet the work’s needs. On the one hand, no one denies that Internet is currently one of the most useful media in our daily life. As a college student, I get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails with my net friends. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to Internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle. Thus, it is necessary for us to use Internet in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all,Internet is invented to enrich our life, and to improve the efficiency of our work rather than shackle us with a chain. 4、考试 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 1)大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩, 2)考生可能带来的副作用, 3)我对考试的看法。 In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous. To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No subjects can be taught successfully merely through being approached with intent to take examinations. In addition, the most undesirable effect is that examinations encourage bad study habits. As the examination score is the only criterion for his academic performance, a student is driven to memorize mechanically rather than to think creatively. In fact, few of us admit that examinations can contribute anything really important to the students’ academic development. If that is the case, why cannot we make a change and devise something more efficient and reliable than examinations?5、老师 Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The most unforgettable Teacher I ever Know. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below: 1)我生活中最难忘的老师是…… 2)为什么他(或她)令我难以忘怀, 3)结论。 In my life I have met a great many teachers who are really worth recalling. But perhaps the most unforgettable one I ever know is my English teacher. What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. First of all, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer—an awakening of a passion for learning. He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of English language and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. Second, I was attracted by his lively wit. I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs. Although it is nearly two years since I attended his last class, he is the talk of our old classmates, and I know part of him has already stayed in my heart.6、求学信 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter applying for admission into a college or university. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1、 入学条件, 2、 学费和奖学金, 3、 住宿情况。 Dear Sir or Madam, I am a Chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university. My plan is to start my course next term, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information. First, what qualifications do I need to follow a course of study at your university? I already have a bachelor’s degree from Beijing University, but I wonder if there are any further academic requirements. Second, how much are the tuition fees? Although I intend to be self-supporting, I would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for international students. Third, what is the situation regarding accommodation? I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 7、邀请信 Directions: You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually: 1) 邀请参加晚会, 2) 说明举办晚会的原因, 3) 将安排哪些活动。 Dear Snoopy, I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in Mr. Guo Jing’s wedding ceremony with Ms. Huang Rong to be held at Beijing Grand Hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on April 1, 2007. As you are a close friend of us, we would very much like you to attend the celebration and share our joy. The occasion will start at seven o’clock in the evening, with the showing of their wedding ceremony. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around ten, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss. If you do not have any prior appointment on April 1, we look forward to the pleasure of your company. Yours sincerely, Li Ming8、投诉信 Directions: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your roommate always has friends visiting. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college. 1)要求下学期换一个新房间, 2)解释原因, 3)要求单间。 Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next semester. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient. I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments. I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible. Yours sincerely, Li Ming9、致辞 Directions: Write a speech on the opening of a conference of no less than 120 words. In your speech, you should: 1) 进行自我介绍, 2) 详细介绍大会内容, 3) 结束语。 Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to Beijing! To begin with, I would like to make a brief introduction to myself. I am the president of Motorola (China) Electronics Ltd. The following is my introduction to the conference. First, it is my great honor to be here with all of you and declare open the Conference of International Trade Cooperation. Second, on behalf of our company, I would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and delegates. Last, I believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive. I wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information will help you. If you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. Thank you for your attention.10、告示 Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information: 1) 比赛目的、时间、地点, 2) 参赛者的要求, 3) 裁判和奖励的细节。 You should write about 120 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement. Chinese Speaking Contest February 3, 2008 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (10 February) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest. The Students’ Union Department of Chinese Language and Literature
麦兜兜次鱼丸
我是一名英语过了大学六级的学生,英语作文只用模板写是不行的,分享一些方法你参考一下吧英语的学习方法如下我们来看看英语是由什么组成的。1 字母,2读音,3单词,4语法一一进行解释。1. 26个字母是组成单词的基本要素之一。2. 48个音标是单词读音的基本要素之二。 3.上面两个搞定后, 就剩下单词与语法了。我们来假设一下,看看哪个更是句子的核心。假设1:如果你对语法不理解,单单靠记忆单词学英语。就会有:give you color to see see(给点颜色你看看) 完全是中式英语,外国人是看不懂的。假设2:如果你理解语法。 就会有:Because you waited too long to make your move, and now you're in the friend zone. (因为你拖太久才行动,现在只能待在”朋友区”)你就会知道,英语是先做完一个动作再接着做一个动作(以动词为依据)。 上面句子第一个动作(动词为wait):you waited too long(你等待得太久)第二个动作(动词为make):to make your move(去行动) to是用来隔开两个动作。第三个动作(动词为are): you're in the friend zone(你待在”朋友区”)。4.总结 显示,我们中国人学英语是缺少一个语感,我们的生活圈子中没有这样的英语交流环境,只能以语法去理解英语句子中的单词排版规律了(通俗地说就是单词在句子中的位置) 还有网上的东西让人眼花缭乱,我觉得“英语年华的空间”里面的日志还是不错的,让我受益非浅。我没有过英语六级之前,天天都泡在他的日志里面学习,获得了很多书本上没有见过的英语知识,确实值得英语学习者借鉴学习。“英语年华的空间”。百度一下就可以看到在页面上的第一条了。5.关于尾声 学英语靠的是坚持,不能三天打鱼两天晒网,只要坚持就会看到希望。如果不坚持,一辈子(100年)都学不会,如果坚持,半年后的英语就已经很厉害了。加油,祝你成功!
黑崎龍少
1、Many?people?insist?that...?很多人(坚持)认为……
2、A?lot?of?people?seem?to?think?that...?很多人似乎认为……
1、Taking?all?these?factors?into?consideration,?we?naturally?come?to?the?conclusion?that...?把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……
1、It?is?high?time?that?we?put?an?end?to?the?(trend).?该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
2、It?is?time?to?take?the?advice?of?...?and?to?put?special?emphasis?on?the?improvement?of?...?该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。
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微微姐22
一、引出开头1:It is well-known to us that……(我们都知道……)==As far as my knowledge is concerned, …( 就我所知…)2:Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over ……(最近……问题引起了关注)3:Nowadays(overpopulation)has become a problem we have to face.(现今,人口过剩已成为我们不得不面对的问题)4:Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.(互联网已在我们的生活扮演着越来越重要的角色,它给我们带来了许多好处但也产生了一些严重的问题)5:With the rapid development of science and technology,more and more people believe that……(随着科技的迅速发展,越来越多的人认为……)6:It is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that……(人们一般认为……)7:A lot of people seem to think that……(很多人似乎认为……)8:It is universally acknowledged that + 句子(全世界都知道...)二、表达不同观点1:People's views on……vary from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that……(人们对……的观点因人而异,有些人认为……然而其他人却认为……)2:People may have different opinions on……(人们对……可能会持有不同见解)3:Attitudes towards (drugs)vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards(failure)(人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异)4:There are different opinions among people as to……(对于……人们的观点大不相同)三、表示结尾1:In short, it can be said that……(总之,他的意思是……)2:From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……(从上面提到的,我们可以得出结论……)3:Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……(把所有的这些因素加以考虑,我们自然可以得出结论……)4:Hence/Therefore, we'd better come to the conclusion that……(因此,我们最好的出这样的结论……)5:There is no doubt that (job-hopping)has its drawbacks as well as merits.(毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点)6:All in all, we cannot live without……,but at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.(总之,我们没有……无法生活,但同时我们必须寻求新的解决办法来面对可能出现的新问题)四、提出建议1:It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).(该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了)2:There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of……(毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够重视)3:Obviously ,if we want to do something … it is essential that……(显然,如果我们想要做么事,很重要的是……)4:Only in this way can we ……(只有这样,我们才能……)5:Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)五、预示后果1:Obviously,if we don't control the problem, the chances are that……will lead us in danger.(很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险)2:No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that ……(毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,否则我们很可能会……)3:It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation(很紧迫的是应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展)
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一、审题� 我们拿到作文后第一件事要做的就是审题。审题的作用在于使你的写作不跑题(如果跑题,条理和语言再好,也得不到及格分,甚至0分。)那么审题要审什么呢?� 1. 体裁 (议论文、说明文、描述文)� 审题就是要审作文的体裁和题材。因为什么样的体裁就会用什么样的题材去写。那么体裁包括哪些呢?就四、六级考试而言,它包括议论文、说明文和描述文。从近些年来看,四、六级作文不 是单一的体裁,而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如有一次四级写题是这样出的: Directions: For this part, your are allowed 30 minutes to write a compos ition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline(given in Chinese) below:� (1) 做合格大学生的必要性� (2) 做合格大学生的必备条件(可以德智体等方面谈) (3) 我打算这样做� 很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。我们认为说它是议论文是片面的。因为第一段要求写 “...必要性”,这说明本段体裁是议论文;第二段要求写“...必备条件”,这说明本段要求写说明文;而第三段要求写“...这样做”,说明本段要求写的是描述文。所以我们说在大多数情况下,四、六级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。� 2.根据不同体裁确定写作方法� 我们审题的目的就在于根据不同的体裁来确定不同的写作方法。通过审题,我们可以看出四、六级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体、第二段为说明体、第三段为描述体。议论体有议论体的写作方式、说明体有说明体的写作方式、描述体也有它自身的写作特点。第一段为议论文: 它的写作特点是要有论点和论据,而且往往从正反两面来论述。例如上面题目的第一段的写作思路是:做合格大学生,会怎么样(这是从正面论述);不能做倒合格大学生,会怎么样(从反面论述);所以我们要做合格的大学生(结论)。第二段为说明文:它的写作特点是从几方面或几条来说明一个问题,就跟某一机器的说明书一样通过1、2、3说明它的用途。就以上面的作文而言,我们从三个方面(德智体)来说明做合格大学生的必要性。第三段为描述文:以“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。跟上两段相比,本段的主语多为人称代词。它要与第二段相呼应进行描述。� 二、主题句 通过审题,我们知道了写作的思路。下边我们就谈怎么样写。第一步就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提,只有不跑题才有可能得及格分。写主题句最保险的方法就是把各要求句译成英语。例如上述作文的三段主题句分别为:� It is very necessary to be a good university student.(议论体主题句)� There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student.( 说明体的主题句) What I will do in the future is the following.(描述题的主题句) 如果要求句是英语就可以把它扩充成主题句,例如这样的一篇做文:� Good Health� (1) Importance of good health� (2) Ways to keep fit� (3) My own practice� 这样的作文的要求句就可以扩展成主题句。扩展后三段的主题句分别为:� 1、It is very important to have good health. (将名词importance变成形容词 important) 2、There are four ways to keep fit for me.(用there be句型)� 3、My own practices are the following.(采用原词)� 三、条理� 保证不跑题是写作当中第一重要任务,第二个重要任务就是条理清楚。对于议论文来说,正反 面要清楚。对于说明文来说,1、2、3条要清楚,对于描述文要来,谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good Health来说,第一段保持正反面要清楚就应这样写:主题句(I t is very important to have good health.,正面(With good health, we can...),反面(Without good health, we can do nothing. We can't do...)第二段应当这样写:主题句(There are four ways to keep fit.) 从几方面说明: Firstly, we should have our breakfast in the morning. Second, we should h ave a nap at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. A nd fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to t he music....)� 为了使文章更具关于条理性,我们可以用first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)等副词,他们可以使文章的条理性十分突出。作文是主观性题,要想得高分我们必须把评卷老师考虑进去。评卷老师的时间很短(每份卷子的作文只有一两分钟就要阅完),所以我们在列条条时最好不用:To begin with, ... After that,... And then,... The next,... The following,... At last ...。因为用这样的词语不利于阅卷老师看出你作文的条理性。� 第三段应当这样写:主题句(My own practices are the following.)具体情况(主语为第一人称代词I,与第二段呼应) In the morning, I have my breakfast . At noon, I have a nap. And in the afternoon, I always play football. In the evening, I usually listen to the classic music.� 综上所述,如果我们按以上几节的方法去做,就可以保证及格以上分数。� 四、 十二句作文法 在作文的评分标准中字数也是一个要求。四、六级的作文要求是要写出120-150字。对于这样的要求考生不必怕写不够。我们知道,四、六级作文大都是三段式。我们算一下,如果我们在每一段中写上四句话,即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全篇在十二句左右。每一句十多个词,这样就是120-150字。同时,我们也提醒大家,不能写得太多,写得多容易跑题。在写作时,我们要横向写作,即写某一问题的横段面。例如,上面讲到健康的重要性时,我们只写四句就可以了。第一句主题句,第二句从正面论述,第三句从反面论述,第四句为结论句。但有的同学在写的时候说“健康非常重要,”然后就写“吃波莱非常重要”,因为波菜含有丰富的铁,铁对人是非常重要的,因为...。这样的作文的基本模式是A-B B-C C-D D-E以此类推。这就叫流水,没有中心。我们写作时要根据横段面去写,而不要写成流水账。避免写成流水账的方法是不要就前一句中的一个非重点词再进行描述。而要对主题句从横段面去写,写完一个横段面就不要再对这一横段面进行阐述了,应当去写别一个横段面。如果我们感觉字数不够,就在每一句或某些句子上添加些词词就行了。 例如我们感觉上边第二段不够长,就可以这样来加词:� 主题句There are four ways to keep fit.- There are four or more ways to keep fit for everyone of us. 从几方面说明: Firstly, we should have our break fast in the morning.- Firstly, we should have our breakfast, such as milk, eggs, bread and so on, in the morning. Second, we should have a nap at noon.- Secondly, we should have a short nap, even 30 minutes, at noon. Third, sports exercises are necessary in the afternoon. - Thirdly, sports exercises are necessary for everyone and we can do some sports exercises in the afternoon . And fourth, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to music. - And fourthly, we could have a pleasant feeling in the evening by listening to both popular and classic music. �这样一来,我们只要保持本句的主题不变加添一些次要词就能达到字数的规定标准
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