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标题i(I) peed my pants (at the 应改为 when I was in) Primary school 内容i'm (I was) 12. well (Well)，(here was 应改为: there in) the Primary school，i was sitting in the classroom and listening (a 要改为: to an) important class，but i(I) just set my attention focused(#?) on the things which was (were) annoying，because i(I) felt liked(like) i would (refuse to control改为: lost control on) my (crotch错词是裤裆，应该改为: urination urge) (then i hard controlled my crotch to avoid 改为 and try avoiding) ‘disaster’ (to) happened (happen)，(but) i didn't knew(know) how could i(I) controlled(control) it in the situation，i(I was) just busy with my assignment and i(I) didn't considered(consider that) i(I) should to go to the restroom，well，so i missed the chance。(the luckly 要改为: luck) for me was (that) the classroom i(I) was in(,) which is(was) very spacious。 i(I) went to (the) back of classroom to avoid on one(anyone) to see，and my seat was adjacent of(to)( a/the) door，(i would easier to get the way 要改写为: it's very convenient for me)，but i(I) kenw(knew) this(that) wasn't a good method，(so then so i got up i would refuse to control(对)【controling错】这句要重写为: if I got up and go to the bathroom that I still would have lost my control and) peeing (on) my pants before i(I) left the classroom，(other a trouble was half the time of the course i would have listened同样情形，要重写为: The trouble was that the course was attending)，which (would been extending 改为: still had another) 45mins (to go)。so it was so hard for me，then i(I) was very nervous。before of these things i(I) should tell to you (which was what i wore in 改为: that what I was wearing)，it's lucky for me( was 改为 that) the jean i(I) wore in was black，i(I) (would be get 改为: got) some effective cover from the black jean，so back to the story，i(I) was despair to control it for a long time，i kenw it would happend(happen)，so i(I) was gradually peeing and wetting my pants when the course (was remained改为: still with) 40mins (remained)，i didn't liked(like) (other one to observe my ‘disaster’all at the college 改为: anyone in the class to observe / notice my "disaster")。after i(I had) made a decision，since i(I) was really despair (at the改为: in) my classroom，i(I) decided (i 改为 it) would not solve the trouble go(going) to the toilet，i (I) would not (effort to control my crotch改为: be able to control myself) ，(去掉i having done，)so then the (pee是动词要改为:urine) was gushing around my jean。so warm and wetting(wet)，pee(urine) began collecting on my seat，wetter and wetter，(i very liked thses应该是: I didn't like it at all) but i(I) immediately glanced around the classroom to make sure (that) no one saw(对)【seeing错】 what i(I) had done，fortunately,nobody saw (去掉to) me，so i(I) was continuing(对)【continue错】(with it). (The) next (happended位置错了) things(thing)(白happened 应放在这儿) (, which) was (the) pee(urine) gradually leaking down my seat，then i(I) was nervous，but (the) classroom floor was paved by(with) the carpet，so no sound，i was peeing for (at) least 10mins，soaking me until (ended 改为: the end of class)，i(I) just sit on here(there) enjoying what i had done and checking (the) limelight，(after i made a quickly leaving my classroom改为: Afterwards, I left the classroom quickly.) 文章很有趣，但有甚多错漏，但已替你更正好了，括弧内的字或句是正确的。希望会对你有帮助，若满意请及时采纳，谢谢。
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