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A Photo ShowWUHAN No.4 MIDDLE SCHOOL, HUBEI: Early in May, a photo show① was held in our school. It was a great success②! All the photes were taken by the students themselves. There were both black- and- white and colour photos, presenting③ our school life, the beauty of nature, festival④ activities and so on. All the works⑤ of arts were on show⑥ in the reading room on the third floor. Every day, a large number of⑦ students went to enjoy it and they were surprised to find that the pictures were so wonderful. Those whose photos were chosen the best were given unexpected⑧ prizes⑨. In short, this photo show really made our life colorful.“注释：”①a photo show：一次摄影展②(be) a great success：非常成功③present：vt.呈现，表现，展示④festival：n.节日⑤work (pl. works)：n. 著作，作品⑥(be) on show：展览，展出⑦a (large) number of：许多，大量⑧unexpected；出乎意料的，意想不到的⑨prize: 奖，奖品“点评：”这是一篇根据海报内容展开的新闻报道，属于应用文范围。海报（poster）是一种带有装饰性的广告，有时还配有绘画，内容广泛，有球讯、电影消息、文娱活动等。海报正中往往有主题的大字标题，如Table Tennis Match等。海报正文语言十分简洁，开门见山地说明主题、活动内容、活动时间和活动地点。最后提出要求和注意事项。新闻报道应及时、客观地反映事实。本文的标题A Photo Show准确地点明了主题。正文部分结构完整，条理清晰。开头两句开门见山地说明了主题以及最后产生的结果，最后一句用In short衔接，对全文进行了总结，呼应了主题，中间部分把此次摄影展的时间、地点与参赛对象有作品内容等一一作了报道，语言简洁明快，没有什么长句、难句，通俗易懂，符合读者心理，是一篇值得一读的新闻报道。
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Today, Wang Kai and several classmates to do the experiment particularly exciting, because the last lesson in the afternoon they will go to the classroom performance experiment. The "bite bite 00 00," third lessons in the afternoon and the bell rang, the students went into several experimental classroom, we also opened the TV to watch quietly. Four (1) bell class performance, they speak with eloquence, speak good after a burst of thunderous applause. The next is four (2) class show "the egg into the bottle. I saw them put an egg in the mouth of a bottle, because the bottle is too small, do not put the egg go in, but they fell a little vinegar in the bottle, then put a lighted match inside, then quickly put the egg in the bottle, the egg is not like that in the bottle does not go on, but as a kind of drill hole, slowly drilled into Go, "thump" sound, fell into the bottle, this is really amazing! We are unable to
一个美好的食袋
Today, my mother took me to visit the China ASEAN Expo. It was amazing. There were lots of people. Some of them are not Chinese. My mother told me they were from other ten countries. It was my first time to see so many foreigners in the real life. Wow, there were many goods that I have never seen it before. Everything was fantastic for me. I won’t forget this day forever.
