唐小七7
大概是这样:一Dear Tom, I was glad to accept your letter of May 22th. (1.) accept——recieve I don't expect that you would answer my letter so(2.) don't--didin`t soon.You suggested in your letter that I must read more.(3.) your last letter I agree with you.It is true that one need to read a lot(4.) with--to to improve his reading ability.It is the same like(5.) It --that swimming.One can't learn to swim if he goes and(6.) if--untill swims in the water.So this summer I am(7.) the去掉 going to get down to read some books.Although(8.) get--go I am not the kind person who always does things(9.) kind of person according to his plan,but I will try my best.(10.) his --your Sincerely Xiao Wei 二： It was Sunday.I never get up early on Sundays.I sonetimes stay in the bed until (1.) sonetimes--always lunch time.Last Sunday I get up very late.I(2.) get--got looked out in the window.It was dark outside.(3.) in--through "What a day!"I thought. "It's rain again."(4.) It's --It'll Just then the telephone rang.It was mine aunt(5.) mine--my Lucy."I've just arrived by train,"she side.(6.）side--said "I'm coming to see you.""And I'm still having（7.） coming--going braskfast,"I said."What are you doing?"her asked（8.） 对 "I'm using breakfast,"I repeated."Dear me,"she said,（9.）using--having "Do you always get up such late?It's one o'clock! "（10.）such --so 三： My friend Kate was a pretty girl whose sweet voice drew others'attentions.Last year,sha left to study at a music(1.) school.Yesterday sha called to say that she wants to see me but(2.) not at my house.So we fixed a time and a place and then hung.(3.) Today I met her at a given time and place,Greatly to my (4.) surpise,I found her so much changing.She looked very(5.) sorrowful and worrying.She said she had made(6.) such little progress that she was almost hopeless of success.(7.) She wondered that whether she had been wasting her time(8.) diong nothing.I knew she just needed some encouragement.(9.) So I did what I could persuade her to gain her courage again.(10.)
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76. to 改for 77.learning改studying 78.and改but79.tell 改told80. so 改as81.shouldn't afraid 之间加上be82.Follow → Following83.progress不可数，应去掉a84.free改freely85.as改than
杨枝甘露儿
更正在括号处标明，总共十处错误，保证准确率！ Sleep is part of your daily activity cycle. But how (many改成much) you sleep and when and how deeply you sleep (is改成are) determined by many factors. Generally speaking, the (young改成younger) you are, the more you sleep and (去掉that) the more deeply you sleep. Newborn babies (sleeping改成sleep) about 16 hours each day. They sleep as much during (加入the) day as at night. During the first year of life, the (number改成amount/quantity) of sleep a baby needs decreases by two hours or (more改成so). One (recently改成recent) study showed that by six months of age, 80% of the babies are sleeping through the night and taking short naps in the daytime. By age two, children sleep about 12 hours a day, (included改成including) about 90 minutes of daytime naps. By adolescence and early adulthood, the amount of daily sleep has dropped to about 8 hours. 解释：1. how many修饰可数名词，不能表示程度，how much可以表示程度；2. 主语为多个从句并列，为复数概念，所以主句谓语动词必须用复数形式are；3. 固定句型：the + 比较级..., the + 比较级...，意思是“越...，...就越...”。所以用young的比较级younger；4. 非从句，也就无须引导词that；5. 单独的现在分词sleeping不能做句子谓语，sleep可以做谓语；6. 固定短语：during the day/daytime = in the day/daytime 在白天7. sleep为不可数名词，但是number只能修饰可数名词，所以改用amout或quantity；8. 固定短语：or so，意思是“上下，左右”，类似于about，但是其位置放在“数词 + 名词”的后面；9. 形容词recent做定语修饰名词study；而recently是副词，不能做定语而是做时间状语；10. 固定短语：including + 宾语 = 宾语 + included，意思是“包括...在内”；如果对你有所帮助，请点击本页面中的“选为满意回答”按钮，谢谢！
哈密赖赖
was改为is,what改为which,put finishing改为finish,task 改为tasks,but改为and,find改为finding,this改为these,confident改为confidence
I小蘑菇I
Dear Li Hua,I'm pretty delighted to receive the letter you sent me two weeks ago. I have been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion,you should come back after you finish your study abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in China. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. As a matter of fact, many of big companies in our city are hoping to employ people like you. For another reason, it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think it's a good idea for you to return. So what are you waiting for?Best wishes!
