短句改错英语

1.问题较多！主要体现在两点：1）和原文句意不符。原文把作业负担过重和睡眠不足、缺乏锻炼并列为问题原因，而楼主写成了“作业负担过重导致了睡眠不足和缺乏锻炼”。2）Thisphenomenon前面是句号，说明前面是一个完整的句子，但是你写成了一个介词短语（做原因状语）加一个非限制性定语从句的结构，主句连主语和谓语都没有。其他还有点语法和搭配等小问题。建议改成：Nowadaysmanystudentssufferfromhealthproblemssuchasobesityandshort-sightedness,whichmostlyresultfromtoomuchhomework,lackofenoughsleepandproperexercise.Thisphenomenonhasraisedincreasingconcerninsociety.如果用楼主的结构，则payattentionto中的to，在被动句中也不能省略。2.改写成：Forthesakeoflesseningthestudents'pressure,...楼主要注意：这也是一个介宾短语（做目的状语），不是单个句子。是students'，不是student's。3.主句问题不大，if从句中的isturnedintoreality不妥帖。turnintoreality意思是“变成现实；实现”，和句意有所差别。建议改成：Iftheadviceaboveisputintopractice,...put...intopractice是一个固定短语，意思是“把...付诸实践；加以实施”。

1. It is the ability to use language that makes it possible for us to let others know our thoughts and aims.2. The old couple who told us their love story had their first date in Beihai park.3. The football match had to be put off because of the bad weather.4. The mountain climber was rescued with only the local guides' help.5. Tom didn't realize he had lost his wallet until he got home.6. I still remember where it was that you told me the secret.7. It will be a month until he comes back.

there is no question to avoid hardships.Actually they can turn us to useful people

1，makes.2, where.3,the bad weather that4,that the mountain climber was rescued5,it was not until...not提前。6,where it was that7,before希望可以帮到你，谢谢。

there is no class on sat afteroon, so i am going to the park.when the guiter was played, the drummer took his bows.the day started raining, but the sun came out by noon.here is the summary that you wanted me to write for you.coca-cola was originally sold as a medicine against headaches.